TPO 30
Nowadays a lot of companies invest big amounts of money into quality of product to become best sellers. even if their product will be high of quality it won’t be as profitable as goods, which get known by consumers through advertising. In my view, companies need to allow enough money for advertisement to reach a large audience for achieving a high level of selling.
it is commonly knowledge that people tend to have an over well-meant desire try something new hens they have seen this everywhere. if everyone will buy at list once, money spent on advertisement will be make up for. And I will provide comparing example over company called Dodo pizza, which was founded in small town in Russia, and now it dispirits worldwide. everyone, who taste their dishes marks that their pizza isn’t good value for money, moreover, it doesn’t have a good taste, but it is always crowded in their restaurant. In my view their success is only due to a lot of catch advertisement in social media and TV-commercial.
Secondly, income of company depends not only customers bills, but some of them display their shares on stock market. good advertisement and famous name of corporation goes up stock prices, ensuring brokers interest, and in this way the budget will increase. For example, world famous corporation Uber has been spent a lot money on public relations even they were small startup, and now their shares are valued more than the company's profits over decades.
By the way of conclusion, there is no doubt the advertising plays the key role in attracting customers and high rate of shares, so money spend on PR will definitely pay off in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'become the best'.
Suggestion: become the best
...nts of money into quality of product to become best sellers. even if their product will be ...
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Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Even
...lity of product to become best sellers. even if their product will be high of qualit...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...or achieving a high level of selling. it is commonly knowledge that people tend ...
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Line 2, column 132, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...ew hens they have seen this everywhere. if everyone will buy at list once, money s...
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Line 2, column 361, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Everyone
...Russia, and now it dispirits worldwide. everyone, who taste their dishes marks that thei...
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Line 2, column 581, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun catch seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of catches'.
Suggestion: a lot of catches
...In my view their success is only due to a lot of catch advertisement in social media and TV-co...
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Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Good
...m display their shares on stock market. good advertisement and famous name of corpor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, no doubt, by the way, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1373.03311258 101% => OK
No of words: 283.0 270.72406181 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89399293286 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73241083994 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 145.348785872 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625441696113 0.540411800872 116% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 419.366225166 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.51434878587 396% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4622507047 49.2860985944 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.416666667 110.228320801 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 21.698381199 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06452816374 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 4.33554083885 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0682826471852 0.272083759551 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0263629563745 0.0996497079465 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0254967704137 0.0662205650399 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0382512412853 0.162205337803 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270533377384 0.0443174109184 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.3589403974 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.8541721854 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 63.6247240618 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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