Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is no shortage of debate whether it is more enjoyable to work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work for five days a week for shorter hours. In my humble opinion, I chose the former option. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, good work schedule is important part of our lives. It is vital due to workers can have normal lifestyle after working hours like having leisure and relaxation time for themselves and can do other things with their day off. Working in a three days week schedule has positive rewards for employees because they have more time for themselves rather than working five days straight at work. For instance, I am a dialysis nurse in a tertiary hospital in Manila, my working schedule is 10 hours straight three days a week. I can do many things in my day off like studying and reviewing for my toefl exam, which I cannot possibly do if my working schedule is 5 days a week because my time is more hectic and I would be tired when I got home. In addition, I can spend my time going to the gym and bonding with my friends on my rest day. It would benefit my physical health and psychological status. As a result, I would not feel easily burned out in my work because I can recharge my self with activities I like. I believe it is more pleasurable to have shorter work days because employees can relax and unwind and release pressure from work environment.
Secondly, in today's modern era, work environment are busier and hectic, so employees endure physical fatigue and emotional distress. Employees also experience having no time for their family because of busy career. Studies shows that people who undergone extreme stress and without the emotional support form their family can have negative impact on their working performance such as being unreliable and unproductive at work. Such problem can be solved by having shorter schedule at work because they can spend extra time with their family. Spending additional time with family are enjoyable and stress free for employees and they share stories and hardships to their brothers or sisters and it can help to declutter their mind and though process away from problems.
To summarize, I believe it is more beneficial for employees to have shorter days in work. This is because employees can have extra time for themselves, family and friends and it help them relax and be happy with their lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 179, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...r themselves, family and friends and it help them relax and be happy with their live...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, in addition, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2041.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 437.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6704805492 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46360752618 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475972540046 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 634.5 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6063623802 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.421052632 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68421052632 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389752999438 0.236089414692 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139648751974 0.076458572812 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155630697733 0.0737576698707 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284031682901 0.150856017488 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154511754307 0.0645574589148 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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