Some people think that we should keep away from others to improve our relationship, because being away from people reminds us of how important they are. Others think we should always stay with others to have good relationship because we can communicate with them more often.
“Relationship” is an inextricable part of the human life; then, the next more indispensable question which comes to our mind is how it can be deeper and deeper? Considering this question, some people believe that making distance from others remind us how significant they are, while some others stands at the other extreme, believe that being always together leads to have strength relationship. Personally, I believe in the later viewpoint which the rationale behind this belief will be elucidated in ensuing paragraph.
To commence with, being together means that people stay with each other no matter in which situation they are. In this order, a good relationship is the one that each side champions the other side in every single situation, like a demanding, or sadness, or happiness, or etc. one. Although when people are happy it is good to share their moments with their friends, arduous moments require more attention from these friends. Actually, there is an old saying, “A friend in need is the friend indeed” which shed lights on what I mentioned. Hence, getting distance from our friends has nothing to do with relationship strengthen. Indeed, it can send the relationship crash to destruction.
The second reason which is as vital as the first one is that staying together makes people feel more convenient. They had known each other characteristics in case that they were with each other; and with consideration to well recognition of each other they have well feeling and can divulge their intimate of their life. Let tell a memory of myself that explain the issue explicitly, I used to have a close friendship when I was 10. Under specific circumstances, we needed to take apart. After passing 10 years, I saw her in a ceremony, and guess what, we could not talk more than six or seven words; and that was the time I figured out distance between friends ruined relationships. After that time, I learned to stick to my friends and never let them go unless they meant that.
To sum up, distances are always harmful, especially, in friendships; and people require to stay in touch in their relationships. After all, with consideration to whole of my sayings, is it necessary to make distance in order to reinforcement our relationship?!
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, hence, if, second, so, then, well, while, after all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1898.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02116402116 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01583124449 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57671957672 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8710060265 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.647058824 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2352941176 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64705882353 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319290860859 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090865327233 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795943626547 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185256711331 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572533238532 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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