Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It goes without to saying that in this progressive and sophisticated world where we live. Its really hard to find anyone to confide them and finally gets close friend. On the other hands, keeping relationship with the old friends are really hard because as a youngest all of us try to find better opportunities for our lives and we really work hard. Some people believe that finding new friend in better, because it gives them new way of life and help them to broad their view. Others disagree. In my point of view, keeping relationship with old friend is really important that finding new ones. The reasons to substantiate my viewpoint are elaborated upon the hereunder.
First, you know your old friends personalities better. behind familiar to others believes and feeling could help you to feel comfortable behind them. For example, last week, I gone with one of my collages to dinner. We wanted to eat pizza. When it came to the table I took a piece of that with my hand and want to eat it. but I saw she starts to eat the pizza with frog which I never see before. I really feel frustrated and rude. Besides, because she wasn't talkative all the night we stares to each other and the flowers on the table. I really get boring during the dinner. On the other hand, when I have lots of thing to do with my old friend in this situation which in turn helps me to relax and get energy for some weeks. As you can see how we feel comfortable behind our old friend.
Second, you can truth your old friend and get helps from them when you need. Because we choose our friend from group of people that we have some similarities with them. For example, when I want to choose my university major I got help from one of my old friends. We talked all whole day with her about our dreams and how they are accessible for us. Because we know each other personalities and talent, we easily can put other shies and give recommend to each other.
Third, at first when we meet someone we don't know what is the purpose they want to get close to us. For Instance, my first year in the university I faced with a girl whom looks very nice and virtues. However, after some month I understand that she said all of my secrets to others, said lots of lies about me which I couldn't believe that she can do it. This experiment thought me that to never truth anyone who I know recently and helps me to understand the importance of the old friends in our lives.
In conclusion, taking aforementioned reasons and the examples into account, I believe that keeping our old friend is more important than making new now.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 259, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... old friends are really hard because as a youngest all of us try to find better o...
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Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Behind
... your old friends personalities better. behind familiar to others believes and feeling...
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Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'went'?
Suggestion: went
... behind them. For example, last week, I gone with one of my collages to dinner. We w...
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Line 3, column 454, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...ustrated and rude. Besides, because she wasnt talkative all the night we stares to ea...
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Line 3, column 487, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'stare'
Suggestion: stare
...se she wasnt talkative all the night we stares to each other and the flowers on the ta...
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Line 3, column 608, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of things'.
Suggestion: lots of things
... dinner. On the other hand, when I have lots of thing to do with my old friend in this situat...
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Line 3, column 728, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...to relax and get energy for some weeks. As you can see how we feel comfortable beh...
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Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... and get helps from them when you need. Because we choose our friend from group of peop...
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Line 6, column 41, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...Third, at first when we meet someone we dont know what is the purpose they want to g...
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Line 6, column 318, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ers, said lots of lies about me which I couldnt believe that she can do it. This experi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, however, if, look, really, second, so, third, for example, for instance, in conclusion, you know, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 87.0 43.0788530466 202% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2120.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 477.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44444444444 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38859243499 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457023060797 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 640.8 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0785421493 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5185185185 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.37037037037 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201641154104 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599713851531 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755286323493 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145760586533 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844065223562 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 58.1214874552 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.