By reviewing human history, we can see many leaders in different fields, such as politics, economics, and art. In this regard, there is always a question that whether leadership comes naturally or not. I, personally, believe that there is no relevant between being a leader and natural behaviors. But, all leaders have some specific characters such as hardworking, precise, as well as scheduled.
The first and most important issue is that all leaders have to work hard to achieve their aims. They do not give-up and scare of failing. Even if they fail, they look it as an experience, which makes them have more motivation. There is a Persian proverb that says” Where there's a will there's a way. “. It states that it is not important that who you are, and everyone can be a successful individual if he/she wants. An example of this is a well-known inventor, Einstein. His teacher thought he was a stupid guy and could not even pass his exams. However, he worked hard and became one of the leaders in science and technology. He had failed several times but he prefers to choose other trials rather than giving up.
Secondly, being precise in crucial issues is another factor to be a leader. If a person wants to be a leader in his/her major, he/she must search on historical data in the relevant area. Also, he/she should pay attention to experts’ knowledge and get their advice. In this situation, the individual will not try others’ errors, which consequently, limit the risks of mistakes. An example of this is Trump, the president of the USA who is a Republican. First, he started searching on previous presidents’ errors, and then, he promised not to do these mistakes again to solve remain problems. However, most of the social media had rejected him, and believed that he could not manage and resolve the problems, he finally did most of his promised with accurate searching.
Finally, a successful leader must schedule his/her programming. It is crystal clear that no one can work 24 hours per day. Therefore, if a person wants to be a leader in a group, he/she should have a goal programming for each task in a specific period. In this condition, he/she can manage his/her time to enhance the satisfaction rate.
In conclusion, none of the abovementioned factors comes naturally and everyone can achieve them. In my opinion, there is no restriction for individuals who want to be a leader, and leadership is adventitious.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2052.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92086330935 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85070675318 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551558752998 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2086740195 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.9230769231 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0384615385 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136421913703 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412823327584 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336275641752 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871205002454 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184503475829 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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