Nowadays, with world complexity, most individuals have to work hard, and finding a proper job plays an important role in their lives. In this regard, some of them prefer to be in a challenging and interesting occupation with fewer vacation days. However, a lot of individuals put more weight on their leisure time, which means that if they face with a dilemma between high job satisfaction rate and more vacation days, they choose the second option. I, personally, cast doubt on that due to several conspicuous reasons which will be elaborated as follows.
First of all, the possibility of job promotion is a critical factor for individuals in which, if they can be in a better position after a while, they work harder. It is crystal clear that no one can get a promotion in a boring job. Therefore, it increases dissatisfaction rate. On the other hand, interesting job enhances individuals ambitious and gives a lot of positive energy to them. Accordingly, being in fewer vacation days is not a big deal, and they can manage it easily.
Moreover, if a person likes his/her career, long working time is not difficult for them. This could be vice versa, which means that if a job is not enjoyable, they feel exhausted and not interested even when they are on vacation. It is because of the fact that they are always thinking about the boring time they have to spend after their holiday. An example of this is one of my colleagues, who does not like his position. Although he can spend 10 days a month on vacation, he always nagging, which mitigates his concentration.
All in all, I, totally, support the idea of choosing an interesting and challenging job with less vacation days. I believe that future job promotion as well as every single time we must spend on working are two significant factors to approve my viewpoint, which has discussed in the previous paragraphs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...d even when they are on vacation. It is because of the fact that they are always thinking about the bori...
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Line 5, column 530, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing, which mitigates his concentration. All in all, I, totally, support the idea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, while, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 324.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81172839506 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.807419012 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.939312937 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4375 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217535777598 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748405897061 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735758614053 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147436859453 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592544095854 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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