Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Movies and televisions should always show audience
that good people are rewarded and bad people are
punished.
Nowadays, social media plays a dramatic role in people's culture and desires. Movies, television and other social media orient people's lives in each society. Some people believe that the movies and televisions' shows should not be based on this principle that always good people be praised and bad people be punished. However, others believe that movies and televisions' programs should support this idea. I strongly agree with the latter, many reasons support my viewpoint, two of which I will elucidate in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, there is a strong relation between most people's lives and televisions; so, the content of the movies has a dramatic effect on people's mindsets. Repeating this opinion that good people are awarded and bad people are punished can have a good effect not only on the individual lives but also on society. People who grow up watching the movies with this conception are more conscious about their works and their influences on their lives and society. Moreover, most people prefer to be praised and awarded as a hero or heroine rather than be punished as a crime?; so, showing these movies encourages people to avoid bad behaviors. Consequently, it leads to reduce the rate of crime in a society which is a great achievement. For instance, I read an article some months ago; and, it was about the influences of some movies in different genders on people's lives at different times. According to this article, the people who watch movies based on moral pay more attention to their behavior. In contrast, most of the prisoners and crimes were interested in movies which the main character of them was a bad man who reaches wealth, fame and other things.
Moreover, such movies that show bad people will be punished; and, good people will be awarded directly show that each body is responsible for his/her behavior, Therefore, movies and televisions can teach people that they should be responsible for their works. Movies that show good people or bad people will face the results of their works allow people to be informed about the conclusion of their works before starting it according to the rules of that society.
To put everything in a nutshell, all the abovementioned reasons lead us to conclude that movies and televisions should emphasize that always good people are awarded and bad people will be punished due to the notable impacts of the movies and social media on people's lives. The movies with moral conception encourage people to be honest and vice versa. the movies which show that award or punishment are the results of people's behavior teaches people to be responsible to their works; and, also, encourage them to behavior similar to the hero or heroine of the movies to be awarded, that lead to has a society with more moral values.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2329.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 471.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94479830149 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53256253607 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.422505307856 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 721.8 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.546910834 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.388888889 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390318406335 0.236089414692 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152583548415 0.076458572812 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868800954305 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298777158146 0.150856017488 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354755513578 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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