Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Nowadays it is easier to maintain good health than in the past
There is no doubt, the health was one of the most important life issue for mankind during history. Because one of the rudimentary principle of nation progress and also protect themselfe from the other nation probebly attac or ect is pepole should have good condition physically, so this fact that mankind has inherent desire for survival from early mankind to smart mankind not changed. Some bilives nowdays the incridible and significant progress in scince helped human to protect themself from disease. however, some others may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that life style of humane changed and very harmful risk factor for life huge increased in comparison the past. from my own perspective, the first belief is true. In what follows, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
The first reason coming to mind to substantiate my standpoint is concerned with this issue that progress of computer scince strongly effect on other field of scince specially helped medical scince to diagnosis and treatment diseases. Today elctronic instrument such as MRI, X-Ray, clinical laboratory instrument and ect help to the doctor treatment patient much efficency hence very diverce diseases can treatment in erly stage befor goes to uncontrol condition such as different cancer.
While in the past, some traditinal care used to treatment patient according superstition way with high error and not efficent result.
The last but not least reason by which the claim is justified is incredible progress in fundamental scince like chemistry, biology and biochemistry eventuate produce usefull and selective and specific drug to treatment specific diseases. Nowdays the importence of drug on efficent treatment not covered any one. With times go on eeach day we hear about synthisis efficent drug with high effect and low side effect that show now we have more diseases under control.
In conclusion, actully its not fair to comparision health condition in past with nowdays because the humane life style so changed and the progress in medical scince very helped to the humane. although we have some progress but every day we have some exposure with countless chemical product that has terrible effet on health body that we should consume this bad spect of scince progress. Nevertheless I strongly believe nowdays we have significant distance in compision past health condition.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However
...human to protect themself from disease. however, some others may take an opposite viewp...
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Suggestion: mind substantiating
...easons. The first reason coming to mind to substantiate my standpoint is concerned with this is...
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Suggestion: not the least
... not efficent result. The last but not least reason by which the claim is justified ...
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Suggestion: anyone
... drug on efficent treatment not covered any one. With times go on eeach day we hear abo...
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...igh effect and low side effect that show now we have more diseases under control....
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...dical scince very helped to the humane. although we have some progress but every day we ...
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Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...sume this bad spect of scince progress. Nevertheless I strongly believe nowdays we have sign...
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Suggestion:
...e have significant distance in compision past health condition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, while, in conclusion, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2020.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34391534392 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61875365781 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.6870978629 48.9658058833 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.666666667 100.406767564 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0844786042884 0.236089414692 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0306940062249 0.076458572812 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318922642411 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0519853101421 0.150856017488 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319376164146 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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