Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Travels bring wisdom. Human has always been detesting from uniformity(continually). Make a journey is the most beneficial answer to the curiosity of those who want to learn many things about customs, cultures, languages and to enjoy themselves. In some perspective, domestic travels are better than overseas one and from others not. Both of these aspects have advantages and disadvantages. In my view, traveling abroad is more fruitful due to the following reasons.
Firstly, traveling is the best way for people to enjoy themselves. It is crucial to freshness and relaxing. Natural and artificial landscapes are more diverse in all around a world than a specific country. There are some unique scenes in special countries that you should travel to visit them closely. For those who like to visit natural sites, the waterfalls in Brazil and Amazon jungles are the heavens for them. As mentioned before, some of them exist exclusively in some areas. There are no places for auroras but in the poles. These fascinating colors just are able to be seen in the pole extent. Furthermore, relic manufactures are attainable in some historical countries such as Egypt. There are some tombs in pyramid shapes which are built for kings and queens in ancient Egypt. Nowhere can you visit these architectures in the world. As a result, by traveling internationality people would be able to heydey from their life by seeing fantastic features.
Secondly, learning new customs, cultures, and languages are the most integral consequences of traveling all around the world. Making a journey in the homeland area you may visit places by features akin to your town. This despite the fact that there are many rituals is held in some countries. By participating in them people will have been learning more about traditional and contemporary customs, simultaneously. Additionally, everyone fonding on communicating with people in different countries should learn about languages that are spoken in those areas. As another point, The abundance of cultures is comparable with the number of countries. the more travel to the diverse countries, the more intrigue, and weird cultures people would encounter. in sum, traveling is the best teacher who teaches you what you can't learn if isolate yourself in the home atmosphere.
Consequently, having a trip is the best idea for recreation. Someone believes that domestic trips are more useful than travel to a foreign country, but others not. All in all, by traveling abroad not only will you visit different natural and human-made manufactures, but you learn many sweet new cultures, customs, and languages as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, such as, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2219.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23349056604 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95098256591 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509433962264 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 701.1 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4357265465 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5172413793 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6206896552 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.03448275862 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270819645616 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066860433279 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580737104712 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167495707344 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300974653085 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 58.1214874552 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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