Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People today work fewer hours and have more leisure time than previous generations did.
Every office employee have certain time dedicated to leisure time. I agree that people of today's generation would work for few hours and then have more leisure time in contrast with earlier generations. I could say this because of a few reasons which are delved deeper in the subsequent paragraphs.
With the advancement of technology, work has become more complicated. People really need to put in their hard efforts to complete their work in the scheduled time limit. Shipping industry is profound example of this. There are several equipments available to process a shipping package. The package needs to undergo several equipments and documents check. Employees at the shipping industry are always in a rush to deliver product on time. So, with the advancement of technology some of the work is being replaced by robots and computers. This has led to easy sorting and management of shipping material. This has given more time to relieve employees from their work by adding up more leisure time which they deserve.
Continuous working is physically excruciating to an individual working for long hours. This will lead to inferior working efficiency and indirectly hit up certain loss in the work. To compensate for this loss, the people get more leisure time to regain their full potential and to start working at their fullest. The computer science field is profound example of this. People in the computer science field are exposed to the computer screen throughout the day. This puts strain on their eyes. Additionally, their work puts more stress on their mind resulting poor efficiency. Hence, to avoid this, people are given more leisure time to make them work efficiently.
It has been observed that people from management tend to bond in the leisure time. This bonding inherently helps in the management work. So, it is commonly observed that to build a group they are often times given a leisure break on frequent basis.
In conclusion, I agree that people take more breaks for leisure time between their works in contrast with previous generations. This is because of increased stress at work, to maintain the efficient working of people and to increase the bonding between people which helps the organisation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 480, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... So, with the advancement of technology some of the work is being replaced by robots and co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, really, so, then, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1881.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1393442623 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63873325582 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478142076503 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 571.5 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5837793394 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.24 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.64 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.04 5.45110844103 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305094684377 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936851836326 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0985432917376 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204791776702 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722547192174 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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