Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
LOYALTY IS THE MOST IMPORTANT QUALITY IN MAKING FRIEND
Most of the people find different qualities appealing in one another to become friends. I disagree upon the statement citing loyalty is most important quality in choosing friends. For me, I would consider honesty over loyalty while making friends. I've elaborated on this in the subsequnt paragraphs.
Firstly, honesty is best for self improvement instead of loyalty. A loyal friend will always nod his head just for being a friend with me; irrespective of the correctness of my decisions/actions. My personal experience is profound example of this: While preparing for my semester exams, me and my friend came across a certain problem. The problem was daunting and time was limited that forced me to choose wrong solution which was later rectified by my honest friend. So, in this scenario being as a honest friend he helped me to solve the problem correctly. Contarary to this, if my friend would have been loyal then he wouldn't have corrected my wrong answer so as to remain friends being loyal. In this way honesty could help in personal development.
Secondly, with honesty there develops mutul-trust between friends, which is not possible in case of loyalty. This mutual trust will help to strengthen the friendship bond between friends which could sometimes last lifetime. My experience while manufacturing our project got to know the importance of mutual-trust. Our project involved extensive cutting of metal with grinders and cutters. These tools can be fatal when used in wrong manner. My friend being an honest one, he helped me in selecting the right procedure of cutting which could be feasible. Once, we had to cut certain portion where I had to hold the sheet metal with my legs in the proximity of fatal tools being used. He just cut that portion assuring me that I won't hurt me. Then the same thing happened without hurting anyone. So, this honesty developed strong mutual trust between us.
Based on my personal experiences, honesty helps in personal development and helps in development of mutual trust. So, I think honesty is the important quality while choosing friends instead of loyalty.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I've
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Suggestion: to wrong
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
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Message: Did you mean 'had been'?
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Line 9, column 555, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ure of cutting which could be feasible. Once, we had to cut certain portion where I ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, as to, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10028653295 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.721788555 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538681948424 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7812440182 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3913043478 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1739130435 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157935102807 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052505774124 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771172701519 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120913282795 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818914082444 0.0645574589148 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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