Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
When choosing a job, it is more important to like the job than to make a certain amount of money.
Everything in this world has a price tag. To seek something one must earn and then spend it wisely. There are a myriad of ways to earn money. These ways are earning money are voluntarily chosen or sometimes forced upon an individual. Mostly, I think that one must like the job than to make a certain amount of money because of a few reasons which are mentioned in the subsequent passages.
At least once in a while we came across the popular saying,"Money can't buy happiness, but I'd be happy crying in a bathtub full of money". This saying might show one side of having more money, but on the other side it doesn't focus on happiness of an individual. In the end, the happiness matters a lot in this practical world. My friends example profoundly explains this scenario; choosing job over amount of money. At the end of our college education, there were several companies offering jobs to students. Few of my friends got huge monetary offers in other discipline irrespective of their studied discipline. Now, after a few months, they state that this job might be giving a lot of money but there is no job satisfaction. They want to switch back despite of less package in their studied discipline. So, this example shows that job satisfaction matters a lot. The job satisfaction will lead to work efficiently because of affectionate interest in job. This is more satisfying than getting a huge paycheck at the end of the month.
Even if we earn a lot, there comes a saturation point of spending that money. At that moment we notice that earning more money is worthless over seeking happiness. This can be seen in the case of Dan Bilzerian: richest poker player. Dan once in a podcast said that, he has numerous homes, cars, jets, luxury watches and he could buy anything he wants. But lately, he found that there is less happiness in his life because he didn't ventured himself in other fields of jobs/business. This example shows that the saturation point is wake up alarm to explore in other jobs we love.
In the end job satisfaction matters a lot more than the paycheck you get. With your job you could be happy, efficient in work, have better state of mind.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...n and then spend it wisely. There are a myriad of ways to earn money. These ways are e...
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Line 5, column 418, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to job'
Suggestion: to job
...oundly explains this scenario; choosing job over amount of money. At the end of our...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, while, at least, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65728900256 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53747109503 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526854219949 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.86864532 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.875 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2916666667 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.79166666667 5.45110844103 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249474742614 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072998846227 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731941604307 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166294023122 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057439914914 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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