It goes without saying that, we as Homo sapiens, live in an age when our lifestyle has undergone extreme changes and became more complex. Indeed, monumental scientific and technological achievements have brought us unbelievable convenience and welfare. One of those fields is the emergence of the food industry and home appliances. Unlike the past, which cooking was arduous work and time-consuming, thanks to the advancements it turns into an exciting, fast, and artistic business. By this definition and also by this pace of progression, it is expected the time of food making and cooking dramatically fall down. The following essay takes an elaborating look at how his statement would be possible and whether it is feasible or not.
There is no denying that food is one of our essential demands and has imposed a considerable effect on the culture, tradition, prosperity, and destiny of societies. In other words, the food has played a game-changing role and it still plays. We are a witness of the appearance of new food preparing methods leads to having a lot of choices to choose from. Benefiting modern technologies in the food industry not only reduced the time of preparing, but also improved the method of packing, conservation, processing, as well as quality level. Finding ways for conserving the products for a long time in a form of canned or pasteurized allows consumers to just open and have it. Time as a decisive factor is a big parameter for both producers and consumers. The consumers experience hectic hours during the day and not have sufficient time for making food.
I addition, although industrialization forces us to nourish from fast foods, in some places people insist on their traditional diets put their full energy to preserve their local cuisine. Furthermore, mass production of agricultural crops and employment of pesticides to cope the daily food demands are the factors that direct people to organic foods. The passage of time and civilization do not affect on preparing organic meals, because they should spend their normal course. Nevertheless, organic foods build a small proportion of human food basket. Regarding the growth of fast foods research done in the US by a group of nutrition experts. They considered progressed and developing countries as the research target. The results revealed that over the past 15 years the number of fast foods like MacDonald and KFC increased by tenfold and threefold in developed and developing countries, respectively. They also announced that by continuing this trend both the number will double and the time of servicing in these restaurants will drop to one-third.
To wrap it up, according to the aforementioned materials we reach a conclusive conclusion that the pace of our life will ascend strictly. Admittedly, no one can't guess what will happen in the future, but the only thing is obvious is that if food industry and its associated business keep the present pace the different future waiting for us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...passage of time and civilization do not affect on preparing organic meals, because they s...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ill ascend strictly. Admittedly, no one cant guess what will happen in the future, b...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ce the different future waiting for us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, nevertheless, regarding, so, still, third, well, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2507.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 489.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12678936605 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98272817696 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 290.0 212.727598566 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593047034765 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 775.8 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.111493 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2608695652 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73913043478 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205192630495 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516460377505 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338091091107 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107619400989 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325197109464 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 143.0 86.8835125448 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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