Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that relationship and friendship require work, they do not just materialize and maintain themselves and they did not build on a foundation of convenience, either. They take time and patience and two people who put in the effort. Stemming from this fact, a relevant question that is a moot point is whether in order to stay happy we should keep our friendships with the small group of people than make new friends. Due to the controversial nature of this question, there is not a general argument on this issue. I am, however, to a great extent of the conviction that being friendly with a large number of people is more beneficial than stay friend with a small group of people. The following paragraphs will aptly substantiate my personal stance.
To commence with, our friends play an important role in our lives and being away from them has a deleterious effect on our friendship and can destroy it. In fact, there is nothing more vital to the bond we share with our friends because they play a pivotal role in our happiness. Generally phrased, make new friends will provide an opportunity for us to become familiar with more people, which certainly have a sense of humor. In fact, this hallmark will help us to stay happy owing to the fact that the more new friends, the more sense of humor. As a tangible example, based on a nationwide survey, vast majorities of people who make new friends day in day out are happier than those who maintain the friendship with the small number of people. To elucidate more on this issue, not only can we stay happy with myriads of friends but also can take a new breath in our lives. Indeed, with frequent attention and affection, we help heal each others' wounds in order to strengthen our relationships and friendships.
Another reason that should not go unnoticed is that making new friends will help us to become acquainted with a plethora of people with different attitudes and passions. If we take a minute to ponder over it, new friends will provide fertile ground for us to view life differently and broaden our horizon. Going into the depth, with more friends we will be able to improve our relationships and not only can keep in touch with them because the circle of friendships improve but also can cause long-lasting happiness.
However, this is one side of a coin. Being friend with a small number of people will help us get to know each other better than before and in this situation, they are more likely to give a hand and address your problems when you face huge trials and tribulations and overwhelmed by stress.
In light of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 633, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...the conviction that being friendly with a large number of people is more beneficial than stay fri...
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Line 7, column 56, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...s one side of a coin. Being friend with a small number of people will help us get to know each ot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, in fact, by and large, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2209.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 469.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71002132196 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61186110145 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481876332623 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 663.3 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0373838626 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.263157895 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6842105263 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.89473684211 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33779417309 0.236089414692 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106997013846 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701595718295 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182042628802 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076990116644 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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