Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Being a controversial issue, whether the rules set for the young to follow are too rigid has aroused a great deal of attention during the past decades. Some argues that these rules are too strict we should allow teenagers to explore the world freely, while others suggest that rules be strictly set for young people to obey. As for me, I consider the rules to be necessary, rather than strict. Essential and persuasive evidence will be provided in the following paragraphs to verify my judgement.
Of all the reasons leading to my point, the fact that these rules help keep the society safe and secure is the most rudimentary. More specifically, without sufficient or even strict rules, the stability and harmony of the society cannot be assured. Go back to the example of China. In the 1970’s, a great number of laws are badly established, and as a result, few regulations are provided to prevent non-grownups from doing harm to the society. According to the historic data from the government, we can clearly see the number of teenagers who once committed a crime is significantly higher than today. Another good case in point is that nowadays, more and more terrorists from mid-east are young people, who are not very well educated, and their countries fail to tell them what they should do and what they shouldn’t. Therefore, these two examples clearly illustrate that rules for the young can never be too strict to ensure the security and stability of the society.
Besides this, the tremendous benefits that these rules can bring for young people can also be applied to further explain why I render them to be of great importance, because they play a significant role in building and developing right values and principles. Before we human beings get to know what is right, we have to know what is prohibited and never allowed. Those rules are just there to tell young people what is right and valued. To be more specific, a teenager will never really know the necessity of being responsible until they are punished for breaking the rules and told to be responsible for their mis-behaviors. Additionally, one will never realize the importance of education if he has never been forced to leave their parents and study at kindergarten. As a result, complete and even rigid rules are necessary for the growth of a youngster, because it is based on these rules that valuable principles are formed.
It is true that there are a few drawbacks of too many rules. Some may argue, for example, that these strict rules have killed the innovative and creative ideas of young people. But as far as I am concerned, only after basic values and principles are stabilized in their mind can we encourage them to make full use of talent and imagination to create a better world. If the ladder is lean against the wrong wall, it will be disastrous to foster so-called creativity and innovation.
Simply put, it’s fairly safe to draw a conclusion that the rules set by the society are never too strict for the young to follow, because it will certainly benefit them by helping form basic principles inside themselves, as well as provide our society with stability and security.
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... while he loses the fun and joy of life forever and ever? Second, some parents are likely to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, thus, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 38.0 13.8261648746 275% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2923.0 1977.66487455 148% => OK
No of words: 581.0 407.700716846 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03098106713 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90957651803 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8253807613 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 300.0 212.727598566 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516351118761 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 910.8 618.680645161 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.2658071811 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.19047619 100.406767564 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6666666667 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110981301508 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378045177887 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359077117078 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0735855564807 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589317247672 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 11.7677419355 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 147.0 86.8835125448 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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