۲- Do you agree or disagree？ It is better to relax by watching a movie or reading a book than
doing physical exercise. Explain your answer with examples and specific reasons.
In the modern-day, anxiety plays a prominent role in all societies. Owing to its paramount importance, a large number of scientists have always been searching for ways to reduce human's stress. A controversial question which deserves some words here is whether individuals decline their anxiety by staying alone and doing some activities such as watching videos or film and reading books or they contribute to some gyms for doing sports or not. I assume that participating in some sports help people to reduce stress efficiently. In what follows, the most clear-cut reasons will be discussed.
The first argumentative factor to take into account is that doing regular exercise is help humans to increase social activities. To shed more light on this matter, many psychologists believe that when people struggle with depression, they should have participated in social activities. One of the best places is both gyms and sports clubs. In this situation, by participating in group sports like volleyball or football, humans start to cooperate and speak with ones, and forget their problems; hence, increasing social activities help people to reduce stress. Furthermore, doing regular sports, increase the level of oxygen in the human's mind so that would people become happier.
Another equally significant point is that exercise is responsible for individuals become happier. To elaborate on this point, I should say that exercise has responsible to produce dopamine hormones in the human's brain. Dopamine is a hormone that has responsible to become humans happy and makes good feelings for them. Most scientists assert that an important way to generate dopamine is doing a regular sport. Moreover, sports can prevent some arduous diseases such as blood pressure and heart attack that make people become depressed. If people struggle with these diseases, they would become depressions so that doing regular activities helps people in many ways.
Taking all the aforementioned reasons and examples into account, I personally believe that doing some physical activities help people to reduce their stress levels. I say that participating in regular sports not only does increase social connection but also help people become happier.
- TPO 40 80
- TPO 43 73
- TPO 40 73
- In order to stay healthy, many people choose to exercise. Some people tend to exercise individually such as running and riding bicycles, etc. Some people tend to participate in group exercises such as team sports. Which one do you prefer and why? 66
- It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents job 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ies. Owing to its paramount importance, a large number of scientists have always been searching f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1898.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45402298851 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80254187889 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525862068966 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4188448087 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.444444444 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124982156419 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401298220727 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447673665206 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847516343147 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0117386626395 0.0645574589148 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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