do you agree or disagree? it is easier to become educated today than it was in the past.
The quedo
To begin with, it is axiomatic that the number of the schools and the universities has increased in compared with the past; consequently people are not forced to travel to far places. In addition to nowadays the universities have provided an ample mass of facilities for their students. For instance, take the most equipped laboratories, the best libraries with the newest published books, the most comfort dormitories, high speed of internet and list goes on. All of this condition motivates young generation for becoming educated.
The second reason that I advocate the high percentage of educated people in these days lies in the fact of the technology. It goes without saying that the technology has changed the world in any major and also it keeps marching forward; as a result the invention of the computer, internet, tablets and smartphones and other worthwhile devices play a crucial role in people's life. Students are able to gain the most up-dated data in a limited time. Even more there are some the universities that have created online courses for youth without wasting any time or money. In such a circumstance, it will not be odd that majority of people have become educated.
Moreover, there is a bit of different point here. Since the world is changing every day; therefore the companies, factories and other institutions should keep up themselves with these changes. As we all know, the competition has intensified among societies; as a result the employers have provided some beds for their employees to study in high levels.
By taking all above mentioned arguments, this conclusion could been drawn that level of literacy has raised up in compared with the past because of the existence of more universities, improving technology, requiring the societies and being eager of people toward the study.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12292358804 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80219117142 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604651162791 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.3148567616 48.9658058833 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.615384615 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.45110844103 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0438815356931 0.236089414692 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0165622510094 0.076458572812 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0217195200995 0.0737576698707 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0251256739936 0.150856017488 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0148365638023 0.0645574589148 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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