do you agree or disagree it’s better for children to grow up in the countryside?
The environment of children life is very important because of surround environment effect on purpose and plans of people life. Sometimes people say that it’s better for children to grow up in the country side. But I’d rather children to grow up in a big city instead of the country side. There is much reason for this option (selection). It is said in follow as …
I believe that there are not enough amenity for children in country side. In fact always most of the amenity and education equipment are focused in capital and central parts of cities. It looks that are not amusement equipment in country side sufficiently. For instance, last year I went to visit my friend who live in country side. There was not ample dinky water and they had to provide their dinky water of release river. Also lake of educational, amenity and amusement equipment make that country side is not a good selection for life children.
On the other hand it’s more important reason for my idea. When children grow up in country side, they addicted to surround country side and when they come in big city it’s hard to them life in big city. Because of they have had no experience of life in crowded and noisy places. As result new condition can bother them and they have no tranquility and it’s May that cannot adept themselves with new situation. This problem effect their educational and relationship aspects. Eventually I think it’s better to children don’t experience life in country side for long time.
Finally because of there are not enough amenity and educational equipment in country side and along with that it makes children separate from real surround life and it males problem for them. I think its good idea that children are taken in the countryside for pastime and amusement because of the country side has more clean air and there are usually without the loud noise. s
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, look, may, so, for instance, i think, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8527607362 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50946493895 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466257668712 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.490114406 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8888888889 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235610734152 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924378057596 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.099516419785 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169938028728 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081595211056 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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