Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Advertising influences people's behavior in a negative way.
Advertising is the most powerful weapon of companies in competition with market rivals to sell more. Society is often divided on the positive or negative influence of this method on an individual's behavior. I believe that advertisings are designed to benefit producing company not people even by frauding, so it has a negative impact on people's behavior. There are two reasons why I subscribe to this idea.
First, the advertisements are designed and produced by companies to benefit them not consumers. People are prey to producers who try to catch their attention. Big companies invest a lot of money each year in different ways of advertising just to sell more, so it is natural that they don't care about the consumer's benefit. For example, as a fast-food producer, you should try to focus on interesting aspects of your product like the taste, not on its harmful consequences like bad effects on health. It is obvious that economic profit is the first priority.
Second, the advertisements are designed in a way that forms a false feeling of need in people who are watching them. A well-planned commercial can change a family wishlist to open a space for its product while the family members don't really need it. Take a personal experience as an example, I had allocated some money to fix a problem in my car's handling that really bothered me. But, after I saw an advertisement about the magical effects of a fuel complement in a gas station, I spent all my money on it while still suffering from bad handling.
In conclusion, I suggest that anyone just consider his real necessities when planning his budget and, don't pay attention to commercials which are produced cleverly in favor of the company's profit.
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- Tpo 54 integrated 86
- tpo 62 integrated 68
- tpo 61 integrated task 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Nowadays people are more willing to help people they don t know for example by giving clothing and food to people who need them than they were in the past Use specific reasons and examples to support y 70
- Do you agree or disagree with this opinion Advertising influences people s behavior in a negative way 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 186, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...negative influence of this method on an individuals behavior. I believe that advertisings a...
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Line 2, column 284, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...o sell more, so it is natural that they dont care about the consumers benefit. For e...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...or its product while the family members dont really need it. Take a personal experie...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...cessities when planning his budget and, dont pay attention to commercials which are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, second, so, still, well, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 292.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87671232877 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8823737507 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606164383562 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0711391516 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.714285714 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20008711916 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671246067716 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693291170313 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113099699701 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112314342453 0.0645574589148 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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