Do you agree or disagree? People gain more happiness from their jobs than their social life.
Throughout the history, the human can find accurate and comprehensive answers for so many questions, but some of them still remain mysterious. The word "happiness" is one of those expressions that does not have specific definition, and that is why there are various attitudes toward this fundamental word. A plethora of people is the conviction that jobs present the happiness to them, and contrary to this popular belief, there are those who argue that social life brings more joyful for the human. I am of the opinion that, the latest group has more acceptable view, and the following explanations will further elaborate on this perspective.
First and foremost, social life contains broad scope of life that including variety of activities so that job life is integral part of each person's social life. Many people go to work as they want to establish relationships with others; therefore, no one can distinguish the job from its social life. Besides, there are some factors which play significant role in being successful in each career. One of the most valuable characteristics of a prospect individual is to have very good social life as he can easily develop his communication with other, and consequently others tend to associate with him. Undoubtedly, having good relations is one of the most crucial factors for being happy in life.
Another important fact that should be taken into consideration is that being happiness is the inter issue, although, some people are seeking for it outside themselves. Thus, no matter someone has a good job or not, or whether he is satisfied with his social life. Furthermore, fierce competition in modern societies presents new challenges and put new demands on people. As a result, there are the dozen of people who do not have an opportunity to work in their desired field, or environment which is notable important element for being happy in life. Subsequently, inappropriate circumstances enforce a large crowd to be happy with their social life or other relationships without paying attention to the extent of their satisfaction of their job position.
On the basis of the point mentioned above I am convinced that job is inevitable part of social life, and people can obtain equal happiness from both. Also, happy people learn how to be satisfied with their situation regardless of the status of their profession in the community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...onsideration is that being happiness is the inter issue, although, some people are seekin...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'thus', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.226544622426 0.229887763892 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.139588100686 0.158761421928 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.12585812357 0.0866891130778 145% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0411899313501 0.046263068375 89% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0434782608696 0.0685040099705 63% => OK
Prepositions: 0.130434782609 0.118717715034 110% => OK
Participles: 0.025171624714 0.0351676179071 72% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.99042163648 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0228832951945 0.0309702414327 74% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0938215102975 0.0887237588012 106% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0137299771167 0.0209618222197 65% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0183066361556 0.0139019557991 132% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2404.0 2387.08602151 101% => OK
No of words: 392.0 408.028673835 96% => OK
Chars per words: 6.13265306122 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.341836734694 0.338922669872 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.255102040816 0.251872472559 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.183673469388 0.174417080927 105% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.155612244898 0.112833075102 138% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99042163648 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545918367347 0.524397521467 104% => OK
Word variations: 61.845247813 59.2087087015 104% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 24.5 20.5533526081 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5033709916 48.84282405 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.25 120.699889404 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.5533526081 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.644075263715 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 50.0102040816 45.7405998639 109% => OK
Elegance: 1.70408163265 1.45489161554 117% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187954846345 0.300154397459 63% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0988789297738 0.103427244359 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0774302501129 0.0752933317313 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.534010339599 0.497263757937 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.148170352644 0.151897553556 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786776297925 0.114077575197 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599909951423 0.0781384742642 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.372969463356 0.336927656856 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0349706542222 0.067059652881 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141142730097 0.210909579961 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596563175312 0.0618886996521 96% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.