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Do you agree or disagree? People meet many problems in their daily life and they can solve them by themselves or with the help of their families, so the help from the government is not necessary.

In the modern era, people's problem has played a prominent role in all societies. Because it is of paramount importance, researchers have always searched for solving problems. A controversial question which deserves some word here is that who is responsible for solving these problems. Some people may hold the view that human would solve problems by themselves and their family. However, some others may take the opposite viewpoint and believe that for solving the problems fundamentally, the government should help people to solve it. I personally contend that the government must help citizen to solve their life problems. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.

The first important factor to be mentioned is that one of the most important problems that people faced is financial problems. To shed more light on this matter, when scientists search for finding the base of people's problems, they find that most humans problems would arise from the financial situation. Considering a family with a low salary in the month, for instance. The father of this family had to work full time, until he may earn some money to buy food or clothes for their children. But, he would face with the low salary that not sufficient for buying their children equipment. In this situation, if all time he speaks with his family, he cannot solve the problem. Hence, the government must solve the problem, by appropriating a suitable job or make some situations and position that help poor people to solve their problem.

Another reason which deserves some word here is that most people have a challenge with health problems. To elaborate on my point, people always face a healthy problem. In this situation, they need suitable health care services and need a proper hospital and centre health care. In other words, the government have the responsibility for making a high qualities health care centre for solving human problems. Also, they have a responsibility for providing drugs. Furthermore, the government must make a free situation for curing poor people. So, in many situations, the government have the responsibility of humans problems.

All in all, considering all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that governments have the responsibility for solving citizen's problem. I believe that the government not only mus make a proper job for their people but also must make a suitable health care centre for solving the health problem of people.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 411, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
.... The father of this family had to work full time, until he may earn some money to buy fo...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 352, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'qualities'' or 'quality's'?
Suggestion: qualities'; quality's
...ve the responsibility for making a high qualities health care centre for solving human pr...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, for instance, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2109.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20740740741 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81302087083 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471604938272 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 626.4 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7863041515 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6956521739 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6086956522 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82608695652 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258879217696 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087981032812 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706915034222 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173399859577 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601232203656 0.0645574589148 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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