Do you agree or disagree?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organized.
It goes without saying that in such a sophisticated world where the complexity of life is growing so fast that it could hardly be believed personal's ability has played a vital role. In fact, people's lives greatly depend on the ability of individuals to deal with different situation. This would raise a question to how the personal ability can cope with the complexity of today's modern world. So, from my perspective, the ability of planning and organizing is the most essential feature to whom live in this world. Of the countless reasons and examples, I will present the most essential and conspicuous ones here.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is the lifestyle in these modern days which widely differs from past. Today, people should take responsibility for their lives since they are school-age children. In fact, they leave home when they are 18 and live independently, thus, they should be able to handle their financial issues and all aspects of their lives. Therefore, young people learn to how work along with their study and how to treat different people with whom are countered in the society. As a matter of fact, the ability of precise planning and organizing of their activities to reach their goals is the crucial characteristic which helps them to handle their lives. For example, in the past, when my parents were young, they stayed with their parents until the married, but today, my brother and I live alone since 18 years old.
Another significant issue is the increase of competition in today's world which forces people to have a wide variety of abilities to win and achieve their goals. What I mean is, owing few abilities couldn't reach them to succeed because there is a variety of activities to do within a limited amount of time. Therefore, it is important to have the ability of appropriate and accurate planning to plan all of them. As a result of this, they become more happy and energetic and it makes them more self-confident. As an illustration, a survey which was conducted at University of MIT demonstrates the students who have the ability of planning and managing their activities are more than 70 percent get higher score than others.
In summary, with all this taken into account, I strongly believe that young people need to have the ability of accurate planning and organizing because of the complexity of today's modern world. It is crucial to be able to compete with others to achieve their goals and become happy. Also, to best adaptation with today's lifestyle, it is necessary to have this ability.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ls. What I mean is, owing few abilities couldnt reach them to succeed because there is ...
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Line 4, column 289, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the best'.
Suggestion: to the best
...eve their goals and become happy. Also, to best adaptation with todays lifestyle, it is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, i mean, in fact, in summary, as a matter of fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2123.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88045977011 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66252155047 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496551724138 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 672.3 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5590168953 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.736842105 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8947368421 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15789473684 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23569135721 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764773468892 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608560256722 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15196785962 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364180245901 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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