Do you agree or disagree?
life is more happy now or in the past?
World is always in change and fatly moving forward. There are major differences between ten decades ago and current life. People in this era are more tranquil and is not working hard as in the past our grandparents did. By the time life got easier and easier, I personally think that life has gotten much better and easier than our parents life do to the below reasons.
First and foremost, by invention of many technologies our life in the current century has got a lot easier and comfortable. In the past we didn't have much more equipment to do things and most of the works was done in traditional ways. For instance, in the past there wasn't any car and airplane. Before my grandfather leave this world he told me many lifetime stories that I would never forget. One of those stories he told me was from the time when he was in the army. Whenever they dispatched to some places they moved by hoses. He said that it took them weeks or days to get to a destination. They stayed on desserts and surfed from hot and cold weather. Thus, life in our time has become easier by invention of many living facilities.
Second, in the current world are not doing much hard and physical works as they did in the past. A clear example of this could be my country's tale. 20 years ago in our country Afghanistan farming vehicle didn't exist and people raped the wheat or other similar crops traditionally and by their hands. It took them months to cut their agricultural gains or cut grass for their animals. My uncle told me that for rapping wheat they stayed on their field's weeks and even slept there most of the nights. Thought, now in this ear there are cutting vehicles that can ripe out hundreds of acres in several days.
Third, in the past people were illiterate and did their chores much more difficult. For instance in the past people didn't know how to sum up things more properly. They did it in weird and difficult way and it was by the number of sands -- when they brought their sheep's form gazing. However, now people can write and are able to do their accountings by using, calculators or computes. That's why education is also beneficial in developing our modern lives.
To summarize, life in our era has become more tranquil comparing to our grandfather's life. In our time there are appearance of technology that has influenced our life positively that we don't need to do heavy and physical chores anymore. Therefore, we are lucky people who are living in the ear of fast advancement. However, in the next few years life will improve better and people get more easy life than toddy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, third, thus, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2129.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 466.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5686695279 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40378690243 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497854077253 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.0 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8491517842 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.0357142857 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6428571429 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.03571428571 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202598981756 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05394166559 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564935267359 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126573724742 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476278916474 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.