Do you prefer to live in an apartment or in a dormitory at university?
The university as an academic center the main responsibility, of which is to prepare students for having both a successful professional and personal life. The university form a fundamental parts of a person's education. The experiences acquired at university make students decide their path. The quality of education is essential for development of science and technology. Indeed, not until education gets improved can the society progress. Bearing this fact in mind a question that is a matter of debate a controversial one, is whether students should opt for living in a private apartment or live in university dorm room. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, I am personally on the belief that students could take many advantages from living in a private apartment. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that students face trials and tribulations during their education at university, one of which is looking for a flat to live. Scientifically speaking, although living in a private house required high costs, at least students can make decision independently and avoid from unwarranted interference. Rent a flat near the university campus not only helps students focus on their course without presence of other but also enable students to experiences life independently. Delving further into the issue reveals that vast majorities of students complain about their roommate because of noise and disruption make by other students. In fact, in an apartment not only have students their own authorities but also can do whatever they want. Indeed, private apartment is nice quiet spot that students can easily meditating and do their paper works. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic, revealed by a recent social research conducted in our country; show that students who live in an apartment have better performance at the university. In fact, the quieter place, the more successful in education.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is that students can experience life for themselves and have this opportunity to enhance some skills such as social skills. Broadly speaking, crowds of students before entering university used to live with their parent and they do not know even how to handle difficulties. Hardly ever students in dormitory learn how to confront trials and tribulations. Going into the depth, living in private, provide fertile ground for students to become familiar with every single facet of the life in addition to enhance their education. However, what I alluded to above cannot overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, living in dormitory can helps students enhance their academic knowledge and reach to tertiary education because they just concentrate on their courses and might benefits from other intelligent roommate. In addition, they can save more money compare to private apartment. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To wrap it up, many students face some problem when it comes to choose for live in an apartment or dormitory. Contemplating all the aforementioned reasons one soon realize that living in an private house brings many benefits for students such as quiet place for study or even experience life autonomously. Additionally, students will learn how to control difficulties and how to enhance some paramount skills such social skills. I highly suggest that students should opt for private house because it makes them well sufficient man. If students do not reverse such a trend, they will soon witness a serious problem in their life as mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'forms'.
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Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Suggestion: help
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'well', 'at least', 'broadly speaking', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.240683229814 0.229887763892 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.153726708075 0.158761421928 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0900621118012 0.0866891130778 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0652173913043 0.046263068375 141% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0434782608696 0.0685040099705 63% => OK
Prepositions: 0.133540372671 0.118717715034 112% => OK
Participles: 0.0357142857143 0.0351676179071 102% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.9770522743 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0295031055901 0.0309702414327 95% => OK
Particles: 0.00155279503106 0.00188951952338 82% => OK
Determiners: 0.0776397515528 0.0887237588012 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0232919254658 0.0209618222197 111% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0186335403727 0.0139019557991 134% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3736.0 2387.08602151 157% => OK
No of words: 587.0 408.028673835 144% => OK
Chars per words: 6.36456558773 5.86048508987 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9222030514 4.48200974243 110% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.413969335605 0.338922669872 122% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.330494037479 0.251872472559 131% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.243611584327 0.174417080927 140% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.15332197615 0.112833075102 136% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9770522743 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 293.0 212.727598566 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.499148211244 0.524397521467 95% => OK
Word variations: 61.6211736154 59.2087087015 104% => OK
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6684587814 140% => OK
Sentence length: 20.2413793103 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4277602451 48.84282405 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.827586207 120.699889404 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2413793103 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.448275862069 0.644075263715 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 53.2907830582 45.7405998639 117% => OK
Elegance: 1.56213017751 1.45489161554 107% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309359430592 0.300154397459 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0751537229698 0.103427244359 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0507352975012 0.0752933317313 67% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.432160673 0.497263757937 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0917003519694 0.151897553556 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109584467274 0.114077575197 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874246105519 0.0781384742642 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.492196195453 0.336927656856 146% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.037596385306 0.067059652881 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2318374763 0.210909579961 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186541925291 0.0618886996521 30% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.86379928315 233% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 9.0 2.4623655914 366% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 24.0 13.6433691756 176% => OK
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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