What do you prefer: Independent as soon as possible or getting in touch with their parents for a longer time?
Young age is such a challenge that you are in dilemma for choosing a home or away from home. There are various people who want to get in touch with their parents for a longer time. But here, I prefer to go far away from home as early as possible. There are two reasons why I feel this way, which I could explore in the following essay.
To begin with, staying away from families in early age helps me to learn various skills and face various struggles in life that make me so strong that I could be aware of every difficulty. Despite a lot of hurdles in the way of being independent, I will learn to be courageous, and brave and finally overcome my hurdles my own. My personal experience is the compelling example of this. Since my childhood, my both parents work in different cities, I could be alone with maids at the house. In that situation, I have to manage everything my myself. Now, when I have to go to different cities away from home, I don't feel arry difficulties of working alone. Now my loneliness couldn't hamper me because I had already experienced from my childhood and built a courage that I could do everything wherever I go.
Furthermore, apart from learning skills and being a courageous lady, independence from families help to show case what we actually are. It helps us to identify our potential within and help us to earn money at a small age. For instance, my cousin went to Dubai after completing a secondary level of education. He was compelled to go there and be far from families because of financial instabilities in families. He made him so much more stable that he become so much more successful gaining financial status and reputation. His talent was showcased in foreign countries. Everyone celebrates his success in society. But if he had to live with his parents then definitely he couldn't make it possible at an early age
- Marco Polos s Travel book Summarize the points made in the lecture being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific points made in the reading passage 3
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, furthermore, if, second, so, then, apart from, for instance, i feel, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57784431138 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67866372314 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571856287425 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0017697318 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4736842105 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5789473684 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57894736842 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153154922935 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459653957411 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955670294392 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119118720573 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930160394013 0.0645574589148 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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