DO YOU PREFER SPEND YOUR LEISURE TIME WITH OTHERS AR BE ALONE?
DO YOU PREFER SPEND YOUR LEISURE TIME WITH OTHERS AR BE ALONE?
I like to spend my leisure time with so many people, no matter I know them or it is the first time I meet them. I just like to have this chance to meet new people and spend my time with them. There is lots of reasons why I prefer this way but here I mention to two of them only.
Firstly, I can learn so many new skills from other people. If you meet different people, you can learn so many things from them; why so I believe each person has at least one amazing life experience or skill and you can learn from them by spending your free time with them. I remember last year we had a big party for new year and we invited all of our family friends and also asked them to invite their friends on behalf of us too. In that party I meet a young lady, Mina who was a master chief in an Italian restaurant. That day I could learn so many amazing ways to cock Italian foods in an easy and fast way. Just some months later I participated in a charity food competition and I cocked one of those Italian foods which I learned from Mina. I could win the first place and sold my food for a good price and had this chance to give all the money to a cancer charity institution. If we did not have that big party and if I hadn’t met Mina that day I couldn’t win the competition and help people who suffer from cancer.
Secondly, spending time with others is more fun rather than being alone. I am kind of person who will become depressed easily so I prefer to spend my free time with others and do some funny activities with them. Last summer I decided to set a special plan for my vacation, so I called to some of my friends and ask them whether they like to join me for a backpack traveling or not. Hopefully all of them agreed and on a beautiful and sunny day we started our long trip. In that trip, one night we lost our way when we were in a jungle. It was late at night and we did not have any idea about how we can find our way. Suddenly I looked up into the sky and said “oh guys, look at the stars. We just learn about them in school. Let’s try to find our way by them.” However, I was not sure about how exactly I should find the way by the stars but one of our friends, Nataly knew about sky and stars and helped us to find our way. Till that night I did not know how I should use stars as navigators and all I was learned in school was really vague to me. But that night Nataly could teach us so many things about stars and how we can ask them for a help as a natural GPS. And this could not happen if I wanted to spend my free time alone at home.
To cut the long story short, I believe, it is good to have some free time which we spend them by ourselves. In these times we can think about different things which we cannot completely focus on them when we are with other people. but in my view, spending time with other people have so much more advantages than being alone. In this way, based on two explained reasons plus so many more reasons I prefer to spent my leisure time with others doing something funny rather than being alone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, at least, kind of, in my view, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 107.0 43.0788530466 248% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2513.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 625.0 407.700716846 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.0208 4.8611393121 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.0 4.48103885553 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.98995879354 2.67179642975 74% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.408 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 790.2 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3429461561 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6551724138 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5517241379 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31034482759 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285319493305 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101605141417 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.194101957775 0.0737576698707 263% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.335475655454 0.150856017488 222% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.339859120623 0.0645574589148 526% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 58.1214874552 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.04 10.9000537634 55% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.42 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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