During our careers, we work with many different kinds of people. All of them have unique characteristics and personality traits. In your opinion, which of the following is the most important characteristic of a coworker?
1- A serious attitude regarding their work obligations.
2- A willingness to learn new things.
3- The ability to make other people laugh.
You may choose more than one of these options. Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer. Do not use memorized examples.
Work enivronments vary immensly depending on their field, and within the walls of these environments lie a specific relationship among working people, which is being “coworkers”. In my opinion, having coworkers that are willing to try new things, and have a serious attitude regarding their work obligations being of their characters is more important than any other. I will explore my reasons in the upcoming parts of this essay.
First, having a will to learn new things when working can become real handy. Every single day, new things pop up in our world, and people can use lots of these things mainly to make their work go smoothly and more easily. Furthermore, people who are willing to learn new things are usually more open minded when it comes to dealing with people, and have a rather abstract and creative way of thinking than people who prefer sticking to the norms. Thus, they usually create a better working atmosphere, and make sure they give the output expected from them and they, sometimes, might even surprise us. I have a really good experience suitable for this reason. About half a year ago, I was working at a charity organization where we work with children of hearing problems. I had a coworker who never experienced working with deaf people before, and so, he started thinking about approachable ways to deal with them. After a while, he came up with a really creative child-friendly activity that actually worked and the children had, hopefully, one of the best times of their lives. Adding to that, working with him was not hard at all, as he was very friendly and open minded, which helped create a really comfortable working atmosphere for both of us.
Second, people who have a serious attitude regarding their work obligations usually have the higher success rates. When we think about it, people that actually put their work before anything else can usually complete their work at the upmost performance and the highest quality. Moreover, they tend to make sure everyone around them is doing his designated work the right way, and for that, they will start cheering their coworkers to always do their best. To add, it helps to have coworkers who are serious when it comes to work because it goes hand in hand with creating a sense of team work among workers, which makes it much better to complete the assigned tasks. I remember I once dealt with such coworkers, which will definitely be a fitting example for this certain reason. When I used to work as an intern in a bank, I had one coworker who was always on time, and always did his best at work. He would try to finish every task he was assigned as elegant as possible, and would sometimes put more hours into finshing everything he had to do. Adding to that, he used to always help me when I struggled with any work I had to do, and would sometimes check on me to make sure everything went smoothly.
To conclude, I believe that the characteristics of being willing to learn new things, and having a serious attitude towards their work obligations are the most important characteristics we can find in a coworker. This belief is for the reason that people who willingly try new things can be reliable at work, and that people who have a serious attitude about their work are usually more successful and make up for a great work output.
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- During our careers we work with many different kinds of people All of them have unique characteristics and personality traits In your opinion which of the following is the most important characteristic of a coworker 1 A serious attitude regarding their wo 60
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, furthermore, if, moreover, really, regarding, second, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 28.0 11.0286738351 254% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2763.0 1977.66487455 140% => OK
No of words: 582.0 407.700716846 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74742268041 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.91168771031 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55746764548 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.455326460481 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 849.6 618.680645161 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 12.0 1.86738351254 643% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.2744754921 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.590909091 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4545454545 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.59090909091 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27582338866 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959603718064 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712394520038 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203443525983 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313381808045 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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