Early birds or night owl
One of the most significant element that affected the successfulness of people is the time that they choose to work. Some people are night owl, -or, to put it another way they can do their activity better at night in comparison during day, especially the people who rely on sheer quiet time of they. While maybe there are many people that prefer get up later and work during the night, I subscribe to this idea that it better to get up early in the morning and be active during day on the grounds that one gets more chance to find job, get communicate with others and have more effective time to both relax and handle career.
At first, all positions to work- like companies, universities and so on- start their activities early in the morning, for this simple reason that, the people who wanted to work in these position must choose their sleeping time during night. Otherwise, those does not sleep at night will have not sufficient efficiency at their job, so by this way they can neither do get promotion at their job nor do have guarantee to doesn't get fired. So, it is very important to be early birds person for everyone who attended to these jobs.
Second, it is well known that human beings needs to social life as well as personal life. What I mean is that everyone requires to have some solitary time and at the same time they need to get communication with others. Due to the fact that the ordinary time on which the most people start their activities is in the morning and they are awake during they, the people who want to attend their social life must be early birds. For example, in the past I used to be a night owl person, and because most of my friends and family are early birds, I couldn’t spend time by them. Accordingly, I became a depressed person.
Third, psychologically and medical speaking, the best time for every person to sleep is during 10PM o'clock to 5AM o'clock. Some hormones that their task is regulating the nervous system will secrete in mind at during these time just in sleeping. Additionally, statistics show that if people get these time to sleep, the ability of their mind would enhance and they can do their life's duty in a better way. So they can do their job in shorter time with more performance that result in saving more time.
All in all, it is more profitable for everyone to get awake early in morning because they will be more successful in their job and social life, and also they will be in a healthier life in comparison to people who are awake during night.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 406, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'guaranteed'.
Suggestion: guaranteed
... get promotion at their job nor do have guarantee to doesnt get fired. So, it is very im...
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Line 2, column 418, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on at their job nor do have guarantee to doesnt get fired. So, it is very importa...
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Line 2, column 420, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... at their job nor do have guarantee to doesnt get fired. So, it is very important to ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
...or every person to sleep is during 10PM oclock to 5AM oclock. Some hormones that their...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
...n to sleep is during 10PM oclock to 5AM oclock. Some hormones that their task is regul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, if, may, second, so, third, well, while, for example, i mean, in short, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2068.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 458.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51528384279 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36811305074 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458515283843 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 654.3 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.5433486665 48.9658058833 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.25 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.625 20.6045352989 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151933703576 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055950437045 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703333637155 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954595601451 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514316911739 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.1575268817 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.53 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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