Essay topics: Distance learning and online learning should replace learning classroom.
Agree or disagree?
Education is a significant issue sustainability of the world. Every person has right to take a good education, therefore it is not a right it must be an obligation for everyone to make the world better place to live. About this issue, authorities are argueing about the different kind of education styles. Most of the education centers have started the give online courses besides some professors do not support distance learning. However, there really important points exist to support the online education style.
First of all, by using online education there will be no need to arrange a time schedule to suitable for everyone. Since we all know it is a very difficult issue. In my university there is no enough classrooms and lecturers so, when they are trying to arrange a time schedule for everyone, there is always some overlabs and long break times appears between the courses. Moreover, the distance of the university and the city center really takes so much time so students can not use their time efficiently because they are loosing their times on the way. Additionally, the professors are also effected from this time issue. Since the students can not arrange their time schedule courses are coming behind the their actual plans and end of the year they could not cover some of the topics. Therefore, studenst are also argueing to professor about this situation so it causes loosing time siriously. If there is an online learning system exist we do not need to spend our time for nothing.
Second, the loosing time on the way to come to university has cost to student, professors and university as well. Students and professors spending some money for their transportation and mostly this transportation method is their personal automobiles. And the university should arrange parking area for these population. So there are so many expences in traditional education. However, if they were using distance learning method, they may not need to spend their money to parking area. Students and professors may not need to spend their money to transportation. This an example, how life can be easier with the online learning system.
After that, another important point is equality for the whole societies in the world. Because of the distance education system, I am able to see MIT’s MATH 102 courses and I believe this method will bring the justice for the students who can not take the high quality education and who can. Since it is impossible to make it in traditional education system, this is a very strong issue to invest the distance learning system.
As a conclusion, education is a serious problem which we need to be careful about it and we need to be open minded for the different and new methods. Online education system is one of them. It can provide for students and professors more free time and less cost to university as well. Additinally, it may provide an equality for the whole students in the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of the world. Every person has right to take a good education, therefore it is n...
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...time schedule to suitable for everyone. Since we all know it is a very difficult issu...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
...time schedule courses are coming behind the their actual plans and end of the year they c...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...nd end of the year they could not cover some of the topics. Therefore, studenst are also ar...
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...ng time on the way to come to university has cost to student, professors and uni...
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Suggestion:
...versity has cost to student, professors and university as well. Students and pro...
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Message: Did you mean 'this population' or 'these populations'?
Suggestion: this population; these populations
...versity should arrange parking area for these population. So there are so many expences in tradi...
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...ty for the whole students in the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, may, moreover, really, second, so, therefore, well, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2452.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 497.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93360160966 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68978490893 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.432595573441 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 793.8 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6711271139 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8148148148 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4074074074 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109319410109 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0350842168896 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053156040647 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0644615212955 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335058351332 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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