The expression "Never, never give up" means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree?
In this competitive era, people need to be really focused and always strive hard to achieve the goals. In order to achieve their target, people have different strategies. Some people achieve success easily, while others work really hard to reach the goal. Whatever may be the path, people should never give up. Only this perseverance fetches success in the journey. Although, some people may not agree upon this notion, I strongly believe that the success can only be brought by working continuously towards the goals. I will therefore substantiate my view in the ensuing paragraphs.
First of all, the determination and hard work are the keys to success. One cannot succeed without these two qualities. What if a person stops in the middle of trying a goal? It means either he is not active enough or he does'nt have the perseverance to do it. Often this is linked to the lack of desire to pursue an action. A person with strong desire will never give up and he will constantly work towards the goal. For example, the story of the famous business man Jack Ma depicts how persistently he tried and became the CEO of the famous online venture, Alibaba.com. The success story of Kentucky's chicken owner Colonel Sanders is yet another example. The success was achieved after repeated failures. If they had given up after their multiple failures, they would'nt have reached this position. The story of Ghazini Mohammed is taught even now to cite an example for this in schools. He went on an war for 17 times to achieve his goal.
In addition, hard work and repeated trying make us smart enough to learn the intricacies in a field. Moreover, we may be familiar with the obstacles which arise in the process of trying something. This brings victory easily and the amount of satisfaction and happiness obtained after such a work will be boundless. Most of the sportsperson, scientists, researchers constantly work towards the goal. The olympic medal cannot be won overnight. Time and again practicing the same thing without dropping out is very important. As we know from the idiom," Practice makes man perfect", constant trying certainly makes one perfect in his work.
Moreover, the person who tries constantly towards the goal stands apart in a group. This gives a good reputation from the teachers or higher officials. For example, I tried really hard in my university to secure a gold medal. I worked persistently towards my goal. I had a lot of obstacles in the journey. I had severe respiratory infection and joint pain. Because of determination and proper planning, I achieved my goal in spite of the issues. My professor appreciated my efforts and cites my story as an example to my junior colleagues which I am really proud of. That also enabled me to procure a good letter of recommendation from my professor.
To conclude, success is brought by a conglomeration of factors like hard work, smart work, determination and courage. Persistent trying makes someone perfect and achieve a commendable success.
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- The expression "Never, never give up" means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree? 70
- What are the important qualities of a good son or daughter? Have these qualities changed or remained the same over time in your culture? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2517.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 508.0 407.700716846 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95472440945 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74751043592 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79573232933 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521653543307 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 773.1 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 37.0 20.6003584229 180% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4923836144 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.027027027 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7297297297 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05405405405 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147820149056 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0340016234675 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429763202589 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796649533703 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317486737055 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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