Now days many people consider watching TV and movies is a crucial thing in their life. The question is whether TV has a negative effect on our kids’ behavior or not, that can be weighed in many aspects. In my perspective, I concur with the statement that movies and television have badly effect on young children. In this essay I will elaborate on a couple reasons to explain my point of view.
Admittedly, there are many people believe that television has many benefits like kids use them for education purpose, however these tools have negative impact on young kid behavior.
First and paramount reason that TV will ruin kid’behavior, this is mainly due to the fact that many movies are not suitable to kid’, especially a lot of them contain violent action which can effect adversely on kids, take this example from my real life, my son always watch action movies, one day I saw him stand on refrigerator and try to jump, when I saw him I asked , why you do that, he answer that he saw that movement in the movie he watched before, this example illustrate the bad effect of watching movies on young children.
Second reason springing to my mind, watching TV and movies can waste children time and they might neglect their studying which may effects their academic achievement, for example, when I was in elementary school, I used to watch movies, therefore I fail in chemistry class, at first I felt frustrated then, I think that I do not want to be chemistist since it is not nessesary to take a good mark in chemistry and continue with my bad habit, at the end I got a low grade in all my subjects, this example was simply explain the negative effect of these tools on kids behavior.
To sum up, this statement is as persuasive as it stand, this is mainly according to the exposition that mentioned above.
Now days many people consider watching TV and movies is a crucial thing in their life. The question is whether TV has a negative effect on our kids’ behavior or not, that can be weighed in many aspects. In my perspective, I concur with the statement that movies and television have badly effect on young children. In this essay I will elaborate on a couple reasons to explain my point of view.
Admittedly, there are many people believe that television has many benefits like kids use them for education purpose, however these tools have negative impact on young kid behavior.
First and paramount reason that TV will ruin kid’behavior, this is mainly due to the fact that many movies are not suitable to kid’, especially a lot of them contain violent action which can effect adversely on kids, take this example from my real life, my son always watch action movies, one day I saw him stand on refrigerator and try to jump, when I saw him I asked , why you do that, he answer that he saw that movement in the movie he watched before, this example illustrate the bad effect of watching movies on young children.
Second reason springing to my mind, watching TV and movies can waste children time and they might neglect their studying which may effects their academic achievement, for example, when I was in elementary school, I used to watch movies, therefore I fail in chemistry class, at first I felt frustrated then, I think that I do not want to be chemistist since it is not nessesary to take a good mark in chemistry and continue with my bad habit, at the end I got a low grade in all my subjects, this example was simply explain the negative effect of these tools on kids behavior.
To sum up, this statement is as persuasive as it stand, this is mainly according to the exposition that mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, so, then, therefore, for example, i think, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 324.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62654320988 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57646333442 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546296296296 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.1344086022 199% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 192.907361187 48.9658058833 394% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 187.375 100.406767564 187% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.5 20.6045352989 197% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.625 5.45110844103 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.481562324307 0.236089414692 204% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.240430191551 0.076458572812 314% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.187250015183 0.0737576698707 254% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261747848437 0.150856017488 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.223843814205 0.0645574589148 347% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 11.7677419355 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.8 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.1575268817 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.0537634409 179% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.