In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
It is obvious that everywhere we can see olds that walk, communicate and this shows us that nowadays people live longer now than before. This is happening because of some reasons that I have tried to explain each of them below.
Firstly, in this time everyone attends to attain sport not only for their appearance but also for their health. They can understand that they have to look after themselves. You can see hundreds of people who walk, run, cycle and do another type of sports during morning about at 8 am. About 10 years ago you can see no one in the park that tries to keep themselves healthy. I think it is one of the major factors that improved and I hope it will continue at the same rate.
Secondly, food is the main factor to human life. If you get unhealthy ones more common you will have a great chance to be disordered. In a comparison with 10 years before food with today’s, you can observe that today’s food respond to standard category more. Thus, people live longer now. Thank you for those who tried and accomplished great standards of food.
Moreover, as you know laughing make you live more, and we have a lot of entertain centers to have a fun. There is a chance to have fun with a child or to have fun with your peers as an old. Fortunately, conditions provide us with all these.
In addition, thank God that we have enough supply of medical drugs and instruments. You can’t believe how many people are dead in last decades because of not medical help. Anyway now we have enough researchers and scientists that have to reveal some treatments of some difficult diseases. Avoiding diseases will help much to people to live longer
In conclusion, everyday we develop more and we have the opportunity to live longer than people who had before.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 50, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... food is the main factor to human life. If you get unhealthy ones more common you ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63636363636 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49406878887 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561128526646 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0664570482 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8421052632 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7894736842 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21052631579 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137114676822 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498545832722 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824308865789 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895354429036 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585754542727 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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