In general, people are living longer now.Discuss the cause of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
Most people agree that develop technology affects lifetime’s human positively ,in different ways.In my opinion, lives become longer due to some new researches and discoveries. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore it in the following essay.
To begin with, improvements in public health, nutrition and medicine caused scientists to find cure to many disease. In the past, incidence of illness had died great percentage of population and others involved with that for all of their life if they survived. For example, in many years ago, research showed smallpox was one of the enticing disease and killed many children and adults at that time. But now by using vaccination this disaster solve and people’s life become extend . This example demonstrate that realizing the origin of sickness help physician to detect remedy for them.
Secondly, nowadays public awareness have increased and by educating people the level of literacy arise. This have positive effects on people’s health and can improve their conditions. For instance, because of public warning numbers of smokers decreased and due to some serious cancer reduced.Besides , some factor impact on fertility of human that cause to living longer. As a result, prevent to be expose some poisonous thing can help to live better and greater.
In other hands ,quality of our life decrease in another ways. Today stress level of society is increased and people have less real pleasure times.One of this main problems that people front it, is traffic. This subjects have different effects something like hasting to do everything and take enjoyment away from individual.At last ,defiant of this concept have right in some fields.
In conclusion , I strongly believe that the modern lifestyle can develop the modality of living.This is because discovery of some treatment, and public awareness encourage people to behave in correct mode.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 303.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35313531353 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78043125858 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653465346535 0.524837075471 125% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.369728306 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.133333333 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 5.45110844103 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.5376344086 470% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189435523497 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594100169399 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464242221308 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991139076899 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294242349655 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.