In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
There are many reasons to explain why people in the present moment are living more than they used to live in the past. Although some people say that this is due to the fact that farmers can get control of food that goes to our houses, others think otherwise. They believe that this is related to the way which we conduct our lives. However, it is agreeable that a better way to exemplify why people are having a longer life nowadays is by not only controlling the food but other issues in people's life.
Firstly, farmers indeed may have the control of the population of a country by controlling the process of food-make. As a matter of fact, they are not caring about people's life or people's health but what they care is only about their product. If it is not going to be ready on time, then they inject chemical substance into the animal's body. Therefore, they are not just helping people living much longer but they are also making profits.
Secondly, even though our lives are walking faster than in the past, we nowadays have many facilities. For example, a person does not need to walk far away to go to the supermarket because he/she has many small markets nearby his/her house. Besides, even if the supermarket is quite far away, using a car should be effortless, then one may spend his energy in other activities.
thirdly, despite the fact that some people need to commute, others do not and this is a great advantage for them. Currently, seventy percent of the world's population work from home. They do not need worry about driving to work, traffic conditions, etc. What they need to do is just, sometimes, do some video-conferences and that is it, nothing else. They can stop working the time they want and start it again the same way. Thus, this is a great advantage for those who can do home office.
Finally, by controlling the system of people's life is possible to help people to live longer than expected.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing faster than in the past, we nowadays have many facilities. For example, a per...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thirdly
... spend his energy in other activities. thirdly, despite the fact that some people need...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...them. Currently, seventy percent of the worlds population work from home. They do not ...
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Message: Did you mean 'to worry'?
Suggestion: to worry
...lation work from home. They do not need worry about driving to work, traffic conditio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, for example, as a matter of fact, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5988372093 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39429729685 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543604651163 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.591255246 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.8888888889 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61111111111 5.45110844103 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1422137791 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493863848347 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559532830474 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950854788489 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606345265824 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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