In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
These days, people`s quality of life has improved tremendously, if compare with the past. I can say that I live better life than my grandparents. This is because of advanced technology, medicine and support of the government.
First of all, modern technology lets people do not work as hard physically as they did before. For example, in agricultural sector availability of a variety of tractors and combains made it possible to decrease time spended on a field. This way, with the use of modern technology, contemporary farmers need less time to bail hay and accomplish the harvest. The time left, they can devote to their families and enjoyable activities, which let them stay physically and psychologicaly healthier, and live longer.
Secondly, with the development of medicine, people have access to effective treatment of a myriad of illnesses. For instance, today, people do not stragle from plague or polio, which killed millions of people a few centures ago. This became possible with the discovery of the antibiotics and vaccines. Moreover, new medicine let successfuly treat certain types of cancer, such as the brest cancer. Therefore, millions of women from all aroud the world had a chance to live happy lives with theit loved ones.
Finally, modern government programs help citizens to overcome difficulties. This way, American government provide low of cost medical help to the retired , the disable and the poor. The programs such as Medicare and Medicade let the people in need to obtain free medicine and medical treatment, and hance, maintain theit health and fight with desiases. This undoubtedly improves citizens` quality of life. Although some of the medical services for such groups of people have to be paid out of pocket, the value of the programs cannot be underestimated.
To conclude, I strongly believe that people today live longer lives for the reasons of constantly developed technology, medicine and government projects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30031948882 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93893142893 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594249201278 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0798230249 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1666666667 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3888888889 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172458556581 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519743601392 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469977689653 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108991367905 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581764946843 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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