The government has announced that it plans to build a new university. Some people think that your community would be a good place to locate the university. Compare the advantages and disadvantages of establishing a new university in your community. Use specific details in your discussion
Recently the discussion about whether or not to have the university built in our community becomes a hot topic in our neighborhood. Some people consider that university will bring more advantages than disadvantages to our community and agree with the suggestion; another group has a different standpoint. They think that establishing a university in our community will generate more disadvantages to our community. Personally, I believe the proverb, ‘one coin, both sides’. Of course, establishing a university also has advantages and disadvantages as well.
There are many advantages of establishing a new university in our community. First, university can bring prosperity to our community. For example, when the university is built, it will attract many students to come to study. Therefore, the needs of the students will increase such as the articles for daily use. Then we may consider running stores and restaurants near the university. Therefore, more job opportunities will be provided, and the local people will have the priority to get the jobs. As the result, people can work to support their family financially, at the same time they are able to take care of their families without leaving distance as current situation.
Second, when the university is built, the government will take into account improving the system of transportations. They may build subway connected to the city, which will bring us more conveniences and attract more people to come for investments. We can predict that as soon as the subway is built, our house price will be increased immediately. Consequently, our neighborhood will become prosperous.
Second advantage is that when the university is built, the government may investigate money to improve the environment around our community. For example, building a park is necessary for the student to have entertainment or relaxation when they have free time. Thus we local people also can benefit from this project. We can take a walk with our family after supper or play in the park on weekends or holidays, which will bring us a lot of funs and accelerate the union of our families.
The disadvantages of building the university in our community cannot be ignored. First, building a university takes a long time. During the process of building the construction, it will make too many noises and pollutions, the noises from the machine and the workers. It will influence our lives such as our sleep, our study and so on. Also, it will bring us many inconveniences. For instance, the roads may be blocked. Many trucks will pass by our neighborhood. Thus, we may have an unrest lives during proceeding the construction
Second, when the university is built, more and more people will flow to our community including the students as well as those who come for running a business then our place will become too crowded and noisy. As the result, we may not possible to enjoy a quiet and clean environment as presence. This absolutely reduces our quality of our lives.
Third, building a university means we will lose a lot of our lands. Building a university is not just building a construction it also requires the whole equipment, the campus, the libraries, and the roads etc. What if our next generations if the lands are taken for building the university? Where shall they live? This is a big issue that we need to take into account.
To sum up, building a university near our community has advantages and disadvantages as well. Therefore, before making the decision we shall consider both aspects and measure them carefully.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, may, second, so, then, therefore, third, thus, well, for example, for instance, of course, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 33.0 9.8082437276 336% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3012.0 1977.66487455 152% => OK
No of words: 588.0 407.700716846 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12244897959 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9242980521 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00933920471 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.433673469388 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 954.0 618.680645161 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Interrogative: 5.0 0.994623655914 503% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 37.0 20.6003584229 180% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9701883369 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4054054054 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8918918919 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.10810810811 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88709677419 286% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165111203668 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558026553946 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640039853532 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945507873354 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426835215383 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes. We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.