In the world today,the use of internet services is rapidly increasing. The internet is accepted generally as the best way of communicating, however some individual are of the opinion that it is wrong site to search for information. The prons and cons of communicating through the internet will be analysed and I am of the opinion that online interaction should be encouraged in order to make things easier and accessible .
To begin with, online communication still remain the best worldwide and is universally acceptable by the people. This is due to the role it plays especially in this era of pandemic. Firstly, the use of online communication enabled schools to hold their E-learning classes write examinations and learn other skills while the children were at home. For example,since February 2020,that the lock down started,most schools still conduct online classes where the children interact with their teachers and friends without feeling the impact of lock down. Also,most children were promoted to the next class because they were able to do what they would have ought to do if schools is on. Moreover,the internet interaction have really saved some home that would have been broken by now because of lack of communication. Especially spouses that are not living together.
On the other hand, despite the benefits of communicatin online,there are some other issues that will come up as a result of seeking for knowledge online and they are increase in the number of bad gangs and groups among the teenagers . The teenagers tend to misbehave and disobey rules. Youngsters have access to some violent and sexual images. For instance, last 2 weeks a son of a soilder killed his friend that visited him with the gun of his father mistakenly because he wanted to practicalize the movie he watched.
To sum up, internet interaction is very vital in our daily life. I am of the opinion that children should be monitored and supervised while the search for information to aviod getting wrong knowledge that will endanger their lives and that of the loved ones . Also, internet interaction should be encouraged to make things easier and accessible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, really, so, still, while, for example, for instance, as a result, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0988700565 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8579336523 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545197740113 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3015868311 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.176470588 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8235294118 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05882352941 5.45110844103 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0593320209441 0.236089414692 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.01951878719 0.076458572812 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0201591092655 0.0737576698707 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0342981847219 0.150856017488 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127017234833 0.0645574589148 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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