The government of every country has a major role to play when it comes to establishment of a university. The government has publicized their plan to set up a new building for higher institution. some people believe that my community would be the best site to construct the building. However the essay will discuss the merits and demerits of setting up the university building in my community.
To begin with,every individual would prefer their community to have one university at least. Having a building set up for undergraduate course will benefit the people in my community in the following ways. Firstly,it will increase the interest of the youngsters and parents in education and this is because it is now accessible and at the door step. Secondly,it will also help to reduce cost of transportation, accommodation and feeding fees. For example,#10,000 transportation fees that my cousin brother usually pay in order to get back to school,will be enough to purchase textbooks and other miscellaneous not including the house rent . Also,the student can eat from home instead of buying from cafe.
On the other hand,they should be some considerations before setting up a structure for university education which I believe if not abide will outweigh the advantages of establishing the building. One of the disadvantages is that it can result to increase in crime rate if there is no enough security agents around. Also,it will lead to over population and noise pollution. This means people with health issues that do not require noise will find it difficult to recover. For instance, because of the location of Ebonyi state University in my uncles community,the area is usually very noisy and due to his ill health,he was advised by his doctors to relocate in order for him to recover.
In summary,the establishment of university education is very vital and this should be done with considerations in order to allow the benefits to outweigh the demerits.
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- The government has announced that it plans to build a new university Some people think that your community would be a good place to locate the university Compare the advantages and disadvantages of establishing a new university in your community Use speci 8
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, at least, for example, for instance, in summary, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 321.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11838006231 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11359991904 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551401869159 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9501064962 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.6875 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 5.45110844103 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217444677642 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068965217181 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608567893652 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1425252187 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606662944478 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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