The government has announced that it plans to build a new university. Some people think that your community would be a good place to locate the university. Compare the advantages and disadvantages of establishing a new university in your community.
It is obvious that there are both advantages and disadvantages for our community if the government builds a university here. In my view, I strongly believe that its advantages overweight its negative sides.
Establishing a college here will generate the large number of job opportunities. It is extremely inevitable to need many employees for such a big institution, such as dustmen and doorkeepers. This will efficiently create fairly more positions and relieve the pressure of local unemployment. For example, since my father is good at cooking and lost his job, he is applying for the positons as a chief in this university. If he will get the job, he could not only make a living and support our family, but also make a small contribution to the college.
More local high school students will choose this university as it provides them more convenience. With the college around their home, they are able to save the huge amount of time on the roads and therefore have more extra time to do other things like accompanying their family and taking part in various activities. For example, I will be certainly choose the community university, for it is extraordinary convenient for me to take care of my grandmother. In fact, my grandmother is too old to do some essential things, such as cooking and washing clothes. If I will study near my home, I would live home and help her with difficulties. Besides, I can have more time accompany my family and hence connect each other closely.
Surely, during setting up the university, noise and pollution are the uncomfortable and serious issues, which highly disturb people’ life. But it is temporary. After the constructions are completed, local people can make best use of some places and equipment. For instance, the elder can do morning exercise in the playground and the adults can plan balls with their friends on weekends. The existence of the university increase the chances of entertainment.
In a word ,people living in the community are greatly beneficial from the new university, like to deal with the local unemployed workforce and to give local students benefits. Comparing with its advantages, the positive ways make better difference.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 466, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 4, column 221, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'make the best'.
Suggestion: make the best
...uctions are completed, local people can make best use of some places and equipment. For i...
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Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...the chances of entertainment. In a word ,people living in the community are great...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in fact, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1842.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04657534247 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99262369581 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569863013699 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1666126855 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159942998211 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437925135017 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509792820152 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955241586165 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420305856146 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.