Has technology made the world a better place to live?
Rapid changes and complexity of today's world represent new challenges and put new demands on the societies. Advanced technologies are of the utmost of these alterations and the attitude toward this innovation phenomenon is completely varied. A plethora of people is in a conviction that technology helps humankind to experience living in the better world. Contrary to this popular belief, there are those who argue that technology afield societies from humanity which is the ultimate goal of living and the nuclear war or terrorists can prove this statement. I am of the opinion that technology opens up multitude opportunities which were unimaginable and unreachable without it, and the following explanations will further elaborate on this perspective.
First and foremost, the brilliant breakthrough in medical science is undoubtedly one of the primary consequences of the development of technology. In this era, numerous fatal diseases have been eradicated thanks to new technologies have been applied in several medical fields. Admittedly, longevity is an acceptable factor for evaluating the improvement in the level of life, and the recent statistics revealed the remarkable of enhancement of this element in the world. In addition, technology increases the awareness of public which causes they become more conscious of all the plausible dangers peripheral them. For example, when specific virus or illness become prevalent in the particular region, all the people get informed of it and do the necessary actions in order to prevent them from getting involved in the problem.
Another important factor which should be taken into consideration is the advent of some technologies has been a revolution in the history. The Internet is counted number one in this list so that most of the people cannot envision their life without it. Internet was incredibly efficient on various issues. For instance, it makes a huge difference in the educational system. Indeed, students experience far more useful school days rather than their parents. They can readily have access to wide range of information in the blink of an eye. The Internet allows them to communicate so easily.
On the basis of the points mentioned above, I am convinced that in spite of all the misusing of the new technologies, they have been so useful for human since they not only intensify the hygiene of societies but also help current generation to have a comfortable life rather than their parents.
- TPO 12 - Jane Austen Portrait 80
- TPO 30 80
- TPO 27 integrated writing : Little Ice Age 90
- Imagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting. The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect In your opinion, which of the following is the best thing to do?•Interrupt and correct the mistake right away.•Wait until the class or meeting 85
- Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world Do you think it is a positive or negative development 89
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in spite of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.247058823529 0.229887763892 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.138823529412 0.158761421928 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0988235294118 0.0866891130778 114% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0494117647059 0.046263068375 107% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0376470588235 0.0685040099705 55% => OK
Prepositions: 0.145882352941 0.118717715034 123% => OK
Participles: 0.0352941176471 0.0351676179071 100% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.96939914585 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0164705882353 0.0309702414327 53% => OK
Particles: 0.00235294117647 0.00188951952338 125% => OK
Determiners: 0.122352941176 0.0887237588012 138% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0117647058824 0.0209618222197 56% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0141176470588 0.0139019557991 102% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2479.0 2387.08602151 104% => OK
No of words: 393.0 408.028673835 96% => OK
Chars per words: 6.30788804071 5.86048508987 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.412213740458 0.338922669872 122% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.328244274809 0.251872472559 130% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.241730279898 0.174417080927 139% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.18320610687 0.112833075102 162% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96939914585 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580152671756 0.524397521467 111% => OK
Word variations: 68.4875874775 59.2087087015 116% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.8333333333 20.5533526081 106% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2383907564 48.84282405 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.722222222 120.699889404 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.5533526081 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 54.6577608142 45.7405998639 119% => OK
Elegance: 1.89583333333 1.45489161554 130% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230103821978 0.300154397459 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.08922419097 0.103427244359 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0567192080113 0.0752933317313 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.538766493942 0.497263757937 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.201693390482 0.151897553556 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999165313379 0.114077575197 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565342961691 0.0781384742642 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.50576040622 0.336927656856 150% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0339231866665 0.067059652881 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16702340429 0.210909579961 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031160438192 0.0618886996521 50% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.