Has technology made the world a better place to live?
Rapid changes and complexity of today's world represent new challenges and put new demands on the societies. Advanced technologies are of the utmost of these alterations and the attitude toward this innovation phenomenon is completely varied. A plethora of people is in a conviction that technology helps humankind to experience living in the better world. Contrary to this popular belief, there are those who argue that technology keep the societies away from humanity which is the ultimate goal of living and the nuclear war or terrorists can prove this statement. I am of the opinion that technology opens up multitude opportunities which were unimaginable and unreachable without it, and the following explanations will further elaborate on this perspective.
First and foremost, the impressive breakthrough in medical science is undoubtedly one of the primary consequences of technology development. In this era, numerous fatal diseases have been eradicated thanks to new technologies have been applied in several medical fields. Admittedly, longevity is an acceptable factor for evaluating the improvement in the level of life, and the recent statistics revealed the remarkable of enhancement of this element in the world. In addition, technology increases the awareness of public which causes they become more conscious of all the plausible dangers peripheral them. For example, when specific virus or illness become prevalent in the particular region, all the people get informed of it and do the necessary actions in order to prevent them from getting involved in the problem.
Another important factor which should be taken into consideration is the advent of some technologies has been a revolution in the history. The Internet is counted number one in this list so that most of the people cannot envision their life without it. Internet was incredibly efficient on various issues. For instance, it makes a huge difference in the educational system. Indeed, students experience far more useful school days rather than their parents. They can readily have access to wide range of information in the blink of an eye.. Furthermore, the barriers that once prevented people from leading a convenience life has been cleared due to high-tech devices. Nowadays, people at different corners of the world can communicate with each other at a significantly high speed and low cost, and thus their relationships among them have been enhanced.
On the basis of the points mentioned above, I am convinced that in spite of all the misuses of the new technologies, they merits of technology far outweigh its drawbacks since developed technologies not only intensify the hygiene of societies but also help current generation to be comfortable in diverse aspects of life .
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'thus', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in spite of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255319148936 0.229887763892 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.142553191489 0.158761421928 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.1 0.0866891130778 115% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0446808510638 0.046263068375 97% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0340425531915 0.0685040099705 50% => OK
Prepositions: 0.144680851064 0.118717715034 122% => OK
Participles: 0.0425531914894 0.0351676179071 121% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.02251114223 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0148936170213 0.0309702414327 48% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00425531914894 0.00188951952338 225% => OK
Determiners: 0.117021276596 0.0887237588012 132% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0127659574468 0.0209618222197 61% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0148936170213 0.0139019557991 107% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2773.0 2387.08602151 116% => OK
No of words: 436.0 408.028673835 107% => OK
Chars per words: 6.36009174312 5.86048508987 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.410550458716 0.338922669872 121% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.337155963303 0.251872472559 134% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.247706422018 0.174417080927 142% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.19495412844 0.112833075102 173% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02251114223 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594036697248 0.524397521467 113% => OK
Word variations: 73.9202439689 59.2087087015 125% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.9473684211 20.5533526081 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4924150522 48.84282405 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.947368421 120.699889404 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9473684211 20.5533526081 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.578947368421 0.644075263715 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 56.6629647513 45.7405998639 124% => OK
Elegance: 2.0 1.45489161554 137% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233417239913 0.300154397459 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0841258590244 0.103427244359 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0550467899438 0.0752933317313 73% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.519818911107 0.497263757937 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.203300444615 0.151897553556 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986927986484 0.114077575197 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562684015572 0.0781384742642 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.478639718881 0.336927656856 142% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0664817288361 0.067059652881 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174186476701 0.210909579961 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292639308562 0.0618886996521 47% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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