I disagree with the idea that is better to be dishonest

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I disagree with the idea that is better to be dishonest

It is critically important for all people, to live in harmony, to be honest, and trustful to each other. I disagree with the idea that is better to be dishonest. I will explain in the following essay

To start with, it is vital, to be honest with all family members. Families are the core value of any society. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. When I was a senior in high school, I was doing poorly on my grades. When my father asked about my school situation, I replied that everything was fine and that I was on my way to graduate with honors. This lie did not hold for too long. Furthermore, the school principal soon called home to see what was happening with me. I was not expecting this. Consequently, the relationship with my father deteriorated for quite a while. Had I been honest with him from the start, things would have been different.

Secondly, It pays to be honest. People who can speak up their mind highly regard, especially in a working environment. Companies are struggling to be competitive and at the top of the market. When a person gets hired to do a job, it is expected to make changes to improve what he has inherited. Accordingly, he or she needs to frank and put on the table things are not working and need to be corrected, no matter who is going to be offended by this. On the contrary, if the individual does not speak the truth, the company remains the same or worse starts to fall apart.

Lastly, being dishonest puts you in trouble. Many people are seeking the form to get rich in a fast and easy way. I remember in the 1980s, in Colombia, a vast amount of people got into the drug trade. A dishonest and unreal culture was created around the drug boom business. Many people got rich, with the same token, most lost all rapidly or worse, they end up dead or in prison. Unlike people that got into the drug-related business, I decided to start a career in education. This did not get my wealthy by any means. But I end up having a decent life with a happy family around me.

By way of conclusion, I am in the opinion that being honest pays and hold families together. It is the foundation of a decent society.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, consequently, furthermore, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, while, on the contrary, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44527363184 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57162441799 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537313432836 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2950695406 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.8214285714 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3571428571 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280408346485 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806117911734 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.18533474801 0.0737576698707 251% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168007409888 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147100262618 0.0645574589148 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 11.7677419355 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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