If you could travel back in time to meet a historical person, who would you visit?
Use specific reasons and details to support your answer
Time trave has been one of the most fancy dream of mine. Being a history buff I have always wondered what it must have been to live in a world without the leisure of technlogy that we enjoy today. Where people still used to walk miles because automobiles were limited to just the elite section of the society. Where portable mobile phones were unheard of. Television had just made debut in some of the Western countries and Russia. And yet, during this period human have achieved marvelous feats in eld of sicence, technology and astronomy
I have always been fascinated with space and galaxy. As a child I always had a dream to go in spacce one day. If given a chance I would denitely love to travel back in time to Russia to meet the rst man in space - Yuri Gagarin. His story is no less than phenomena! Coming from such a humble background he achieved to become not just a national hero but his name to be written in history eternally! I would love to interview him on the hardships he faced during his training, which not to forget was kept secret even from his family. How he managed to venture into something where there was possibility of 99 things out of 100 going wrong. And here, things going wrong meant him dying. Inspite of no professional training of a pilot, he managed to pilot the space shuttle and successfully make a touchdown back on Earth! I have read his biography to know that things were not easy at his home and village after such a successful feat, for his villagers were scared that the God will surely punish him for doing something which they call it inhuman. Although he was being discouraged by his family yo continue his work as cosmonaut, his love and loyalty for his country back then was more than his family's concern. His successful voyage sure put a lot of pressure on the America who was in constant competition with Russia in the eld of astronomy.
The reason why I would love to meet Yuri Gagarin is purely for the courage and determination he have shown that made him so famous. I still remember him saying to his brother after his voyage - humans are mortal but my name has become immortal !
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 311, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Where” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... just the elite section of the society. Where portable mobile phones were unheard of....
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Line 1, column 391, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...d of. Television had just made debut in some of the Western countries and Russia. And yet, ...
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Line 3, column 54, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... been fascinated with space and galaxy. As a child I always had a dream to go in s...
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Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ys had a dream to go in spacce one day. If given a chance I would denitely love to...
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Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...ly for the courage and determination he have shown that made him so famous. I still ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51030927835 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39611507837 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572164948454 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.1872019437 48.9658058833 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.375 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.45110844103 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0624595681714 0.236089414692 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0246848055893 0.076458572812 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426159296967 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0442739412811 0.150856017488 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.013976757324 0.0645574589148 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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