Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Music plays an important role in a culture.
Music..When we say music, all we can dene in a layman term is a symphony of sounds to create a masterpiece. But music and history of mankind goes hand-in-hand. Archaeology records do maintain that early form of humans used music not just during social gatherings but also as a mode of communication while hunting for foods. Various sounds had various meaning in the tribes.
Humans have always been found of art and music has been not an exception. With the invasion and expansion of kingdoms different forms of music were introduced in different continents. Back then when people faced language barrier, music came to rescue. Since music is perceived as a universal language even today. It is music, food and the attire that sets apart every culture. Every culture has its unique way of maintaining the traditions and customs. Over the course of time, some of the customs become obsolete but music doesn't. What was played 100 years back then on sitar is being still played by the people of North India today. Music and its instrument also helps in giving an identity to the culture and ethinicity like tabla were originated in India, piano in European country etc. Music is one thing that binds the people together and helps in preserving the tradition and the culture
All these we spoke till now is of the traditional music till now. With globalisation, telecom has been one thing that has made us closer, second thing is music. Music knows no boundary. Rap music is enjoyed by American and equally by someone sitting thousands of miles away in China. This kind of unication of cross culture and ethnicity can only be achieved by music
I totally agree that music plays an important role in a culture. For no culture can be called a culture with music
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, still, then, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 304.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80263157895 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52809695982 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582236842105 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4911130891 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8421052632 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84210526316 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261986931489 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763977996862 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653393003141 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190271695152 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115116618781 0.0645574589148 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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