If you had a presentation in a month, would you rather prepare for it from now or would you postpone it to the last days. Use reasons and specific examples to support our answer.
In today’s modern world, with the galloping rate at which technology is flourishing, the amount of produced data is so huge which needs some way to transfer some of them to the others. One well-known way is a presentation. When I have to provide a presentation, and I know that I have to present that in next month, I incline to the idea of making the presentation as soon as possible. Three more considerable reasons are: finding pros and cons of the presentation, sufficient time to add more material to the presentation, and having less pressure
As we know, and as in a proverb, ”time is money”; I do believe that time worth more than money because the wasted time never comes back, but by perseverance we can make the lost money. Hence, it stands to reason that some people who are audiences of presentation give their invaluable time to us, and it is the lecturer responsibility to manage their time and make them happy of being in the presentation. Therefore, we are in charge of their time. To have a decent presentation, we are in desperate need of finding out the advantages and disadvantages of our material and present. By presenting several times for ourselves and maybe our close friends and family, we would be able to find strengths and weakness of each part, and obviate the weaknesses which are hidden in case of not presenting several times.
By providing materials month before the presentation, we buy enough time to add the required material to the presentation. I remember when I have a presentation on my Master of Science thesis. At that time, I want to add some materials from a teacher who were in Canada, and at that time, he had a trip to the Netherland, so it took me about 3 weeks to get the answer of my email. Suppose I did email him just 2 or 3 days before which I might never have got the answer. With all such events taken into account it is more rational that we finish the presentation materials several days-month, before giving the lecture. These culminate in a decent presentation.
In today’s hectic city life, an obstacle which has caused much troubles in our life, is the stress and pressure which we burden. Without any shadow of a doubt, it is an issue which we should handle it in the best possible manner.¬ By providing the presentation before the deadlines, we could avoid of pressures of the days near the presentation date. Although it is necessary to check the presentation the day before the presentation, but is just a check which does not need to add much major material.
In summary, with all these and many other reasons taken into consideration, I do believe that providing a presentation a month before presentation day is a nice idea. At first, we look for the deficiencies which exist in the material, we can add more materials to the lectures, and also managing out personal time to avoid pressure are just some benefits of doing such.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 240, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...e, it stands to reason that some people who are audiences of presentation give their in...
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Line 4, column 64, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...city life, an obstacle which has caused much troubles in our life, is the stress and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2410.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 513.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69785575049 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75914943092 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94895117213 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473684210526 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 773.1 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.2660260474 48.9658058833 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.842105263 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73684210526 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0915716265597 0.236089414692 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333012572241 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288726437321 0.0737576698707 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0573653827046 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0150261979009 0.0645574589148 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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