Improvements in health, education, and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. Discuss both views, and give your opinion.
Everyone in this world whether rich or poor deserves better life. In my opinion everybody should get education, health and trade also government of rich nation should participate in this holly work.
I believe in this way for several reasons which I explore in the following essay.
To begin with I belong to country which is not financially well developed as other highly developed countries. Many people in my country are so poor that they cannot even afford to buy three times meal,
and their children go to others home to beg food for their survival. Their survival is very difficult even most of the times they come without slippers in their feet. I have my own personal experience with that when I was in my school at my hometown there was a classmate of mine. She was very intelligent and her way of studying and catching power was very well. But she could not pursue studies further due to lack of money, even their parents don’t allow her to study further because of expenses. From this example I realize during my early childhood that government should help those bright students that they can also shine in this world.
Secondly government of rich nation should participate to help poor nation and provide sources for good health and education so this world will get more intelligent people which can also participate in future. If government helps now they will definitely get more shining stars in future. By doing so one day circumstances will change, world will be change, nobody remains poor, people who gets help from government can also help others in future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 54, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...his world whether rich or poor deserves better life. In my opinion everybody should ge...
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Line 2, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...which I explore in the following essay. To begin with I belong to country which ...
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Line 7, column 199, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...igent people which can also participate in future. If government helps now they will defi...
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Line 7, column 278, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... will definitely get more shining stars in future. By doing so one day circumstances will...
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Line 7, column 437, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...lp from government can also help others in future.
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rnment can also help others in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, well, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 272.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85661764706 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43434273385 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566176470588 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4784039533 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.615384615 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163814120915 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598966929425 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781673443499 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902706707158 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630651108578 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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