The reading material:
Rembrandt is the most famous of the seventeenth-century Dutch painters. However, there are doubts whether some paintings attributed to Rembrandt were actually painted by him. One such painting is known as attributed to Rembrandt because of its style, and indeed the representation of the woman’s face is very much like that of portraits known to be by Rembrandt. But there are problems with the painting that suggest it could not be a work by Rembrandt.
First, there is something inconsistent about the way the woman in the portrait is dressed. She is wearing a white linen cap of a kind that only servants would wear-yet the coat she is wearing has a luxurious fur collar that no servant could afford. Rembrandt, who was known for his attention to the details of his subjects’ clothing, would not have been guilty of such an inconsistency.
Second, Rembrandt was a master of painting light and shadow, but in this painting these elements do not fit together. The face appears to be illuminated by light reflected onto it from below. But below the face is the dark fur collar, which would absorb light rather than reflect it. So the face should appear partially in shadow-which is not how it appears. Rembrandt would never have made such an error.
Finally, examination of the back of the painting reveals that it was painted on a panel made of several pieces of wood glued together. Although Rembrandt often painted on wood panels, no painting known to be by Rembrandt uses a panel glued together in this way from several pieces of wood.
The lecture and reading passage both are about rambrandt painting .
the reading states that there is no confirmation that some paintings are made by Rambrandt himself and provides several reason for its support however lecture says that its proved now that painting of old lady resembles the rambrandt painting and refutes each of the author reason
first reading states that there was mistake in painting that women wear linen cap that is very low quality as used by servants while coat of women was luxurious one. However professor says that analysis of fur color matches the fur color used by rambrandt they painted it again after hundred years to improve its value after several years
second author claims that painter is well known for using light and shadows but they do not fit together in this pinting as light is reflected in painting while fur collar is dark color it should absorb light. Professor opposes this point by explaining that light is reflected in painting as we see the original painting why removing color,the light and shadow is exactly same as by rambrandt
finaly the article posits that wood panel is made of several woods while wood panel used by Rambrandt is not glued by several pieces of wood. Professor refutes this point and says after clear examination it reveals that there were pieces glued on top to give it grand appearance while original painting is made up of single wood panel as expected from rambrandt. Also wood was same which is used by rambrandt in others painting.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...assage both are about rambrandt painting . the reading states that there is no co...
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Suggestion: The
...ge both are about rambrandt painting . the reading states that there is no confirm...
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Line 2, column 91, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat some paintings are made by Rambrandt himself and provides several reason for ...
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Line 2, column 114, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'several reasons'.
Suggestion: several reasons
...made by Rambrandt himself and provides several reason for its support however lecture says t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l reason for its support however lecture says that its proved now that painting o...
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Suggestion: First
...nd refutes each of the author reason first reading states that there was mistake i...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ar linen cap that is very low quality as used by servants while coat of women was...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... while coat of women was luxurious one. However professor says that analysis of fur col...
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Line 4, column 286, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...y rambrandt they painted it again after hundred years to improve its value after severa...
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Suggestion: Second
...mprove its value after several years second author claims that painter is well know...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...the original painting why removing color,the light and shadow is exactly same as by ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finaly
...adow is exactly same as by rambrandt finaly the article posits that wood panel is m...
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Line 8, column 102, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...woods while wood panel used by Rambrandt is not glued by several pieces of wood. ...
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Line 8, column 365, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... wood panel as expected from rambrandt. Also wood was same which is used by rambrand...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, second, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1373.03311258 92% => OK
No of words: 258.0 270.72406181 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91085271318 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27333467966 2.5805825403 88% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 145.348785872 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511627906977 0.540411800872 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 384.3 419.366225166 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 13.0662251656 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 21.2450331126 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.264213915 49.2860985944 303% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 211.166666667 110.228320801 192% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.0 21.698381199 198% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06452816374 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 4.19205298013 334% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16222486471 0.272083759551 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896602284117 0.0996497079465 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569741888077 0.0662205650399 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10954955545 0.162205337803 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451922408589 0.0443174109184 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.2 13.3589403974 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.29 53.8541721854 67% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.0289183223 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.09 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 63.6247240618 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.7273730684 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.498013245 183% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.2008830022 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...assage both are about rambrandt painting . the reading states that there is no co...
^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ge both are about rambrandt painting . the reading states that there is no confirm...
^^^
Line 2, column 91, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat some paintings are made by Rambrandt himself and provides several reason for ...
^^
Line 2, column 114, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'several reasons'.
Suggestion: several reasons
...made by Rambrandt himself and provides several reason for its support however lecture says t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l reason for its support however lecture says that its proved now that painting o...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
...nd refutes each of the author reason first reading states that there was mistake i...
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Line 4, column 110, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ar linen cap that is very low quality as used by servants while coat of women was...
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Line 4, column 168, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... while coat of women was luxurious one. However professor says that analysis of fur col...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 286, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...y rambrandt they painted it again after hundred years to improve its value after severa...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Second
...mprove its value after several years second author claims that painter is well know...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 340, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...the original painting why removing color,the light and shadow is exactly same as by ...
^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finaly
...adow is exactly same as by rambrandt finaly the article posits that wood panel is m...
^^^^^^
Line 8, column 102, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...woods while wood panel used by Rambrandt is not glued by several pieces of wood. ...
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Line 8, column 365, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... wood panel as expected from rambrandt. Also wood was same which is used by rambrand...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, second, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1373.03311258 92% => OK
No of words: 258.0 270.72406181 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91085271318 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27333467966 2.5805825403 88% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 145.348785872 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511627906977 0.540411800872 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 384.3 419.366225166 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 13.0662251656 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 21.2450331126 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.264213915 49.2860985944 303% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 211.166666667 110.228320801 192% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.0 21.698381199 198% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06452816374 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 4.19205298013 334% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16222486471 0.272083759551 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896602284117 0.0996497079465 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569741888077 0.0662205650399 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10954955545 0.162205337803 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451922408589 0.0443174109184 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.2 13.3589403974 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.29 53.8541721854 67% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.0289183223 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.09 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 63.6247240618 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.7273730684 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.498013245 183% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.2008830022 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.