In the United States employees typically work five days a week for eight hours each day However many employees want to work a four day week and are willing to accept less pay in order to do so A mandatory policy requiring companies to offer their employee

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In the United States, employees typically work five days a week for eight hours each day. However, many employees want to work a four-day week and are willing to accept less pay in order to do so. A mandatory policy requiring companies to offer their employees the option of working a four-day work week for four-fifths (80 percent)of their normal pay would benefit the economy as a whole as well as the individual companies and the employees who decided to take the option. The shortened workweek would increase company profits because employees would feel more rested and alert, and as a result, they would make fewer costly errors in their work. Hiring more staff to ensure that the same amount of work would be accomplished would not result in additional payroll costs because four-day employees would only be paid 80 percent of the normal rate. In the end, companies would have fewer overworked and error-prone employees for the same money, which would increase company profits. For the country as a whole, one of the primary benefits of offering this option to employees is that it would reduce unemployment rates. If many full-time employees started working fewer hours, some of their workload would have to be shifted to others. Thus, for every four employees who went on an 80 percent week, a new employee could be hired at the 80 percent rate. Finally, the option of a four-day workweek would be better for individual employees. Employees who could afford a lower salary in exchange for more free time could improve the quality of their lives by spending the extra time with their families, pursuing private interests, or enjoying leisure activities

The reading states that in the united states many employers prefer to work four days instead of five days a week and willing to get less salary in order to do so. Reading provides 3 reasons for support .however professor explains that working four days a week is not beneficial and he refutes each of the author reasons.
First reading claims that in order to do work four days a week provide benefits to company, economy and employees, as they take enough rest and alert so company can get more profit and less errors. However, professor explains that four days a week does not provide more profits to the company instead company have to spend more money for to hire and to provide trainings to new employers.

Second reading posits that company can hire more employers so overall unemployment rates will be less at same cost. Some of their work load is divided to other employer. Professor refutes this point by explaining that cost of other things such as health benefits remains same for four days working employers in addition, company has to spend for more office spaces and more computers this ultimately cut the company profits.

Third reading says that four day work a week provide benefits to employer personal life as they can give extra time to their families pursuing their activities, however professor opposes this by explaining that four day work week can prevent employers to be advanced in their job , also company will prefer to hire five days employers instead who are willing to work for four days, company can also expect employer to wok extra time as normally employers do in five days this will make employer work life unpleasant.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, third, as to, in addition, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1373.03311258 100% => OK
No of words: 285.0 270.72406181 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8350877193 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33525602561 2.5805825403 90% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 145.348785872 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463157894737 0.540411800872 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 418.5 419.366225166 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 21.2450331126 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.075398808 49.2860985944 264% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.25 110.228320801 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.625 21.698381199 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06452816374 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380108180848 0.272083759551 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.200446888393 0.0996497079465 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113163029232 0.0662205650399 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277482561254 0.162205337803 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104686569855 0.0443174109184 236% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.3589403974 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 53.8541721854 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.0289183223 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 63.6247240618 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.498013245 152% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.2008830022 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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