independent tpo 41
Independent 41
In my opinion teachers have a key role in development of the society and a for having a good country we need to appreciate teachers. Teachers in schools are responsible about our children. Our kids spend a lot of time with their teachers, so teachers must be appreciate. however, there are people that think in past peaple were more appreciated I think it is not true. I belive nowadays techers are more appreciated in comparison with past because of two reasons.
First, I think, today, by developing technology there are a lot of educational tools that makes the learning easier than past. Todays, these educational tools like microscopes, magnifires, telescopes, sculpture of body anatomy and other kind of tools are available for teachers. So, they can use these tools in their classes. They can explain every scientific matter with these objects. I think having these stuffs causes teacher more relaxed in their classes. And these are somethings that never been exist in past. So, I suppese preparing these stuffs is a sign for being appreciated.
Second, again by developing technology, today we have a lot of data in the Internet. There are a lot of new methods on the Internet about informative styles of teaching. Teachers can easily search these methods, find them and use of them. Teachers can increase their skills and abilities by applying these methods. For instance, I am a phisics teacher. My student all have problem abput memorysing long formula for answering their questions in the exam. But I found easy and simple methods that for solving the questions they no need to formula. Teachers owe these to technology, however using these technologies like the Internet improve their skills and some how increase their prestige. Having developed skills in teaching makes the teachers honered person and lead to being appreciated.
As you can see, technology development has a role in teacher appreciating.
In anutshell, I think, currently, tutors are more appreciated. Now, many stuffs are ready that help teachers in their works such as the Internet and educayional tools.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 272, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...achers, so teachers must be appreciate. however, there are people that think in past pe...
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Line 3, column 491, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put after the verb 'been'.
Suggestion: been never
... classes. And these are somethings that never been exist in past. So, I suppese preparing ...
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Line 3, column 502, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'existed'.
Suggestion: existed
...nd these are somethings that never been exist in past. So, I suppese preparing these ...
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Line 3, column 508, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...se are somethings that never been exist in past. So, I suppese preparing these stuffs i...
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Line 4, column 656, Rule ID: SOME_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'somehow'?
Suggestion: somehow
...e the Internet improve their skills and some how increase their prestige. Having develo...
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Line 4, column 696, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...some how increase their prestige. Having developed skills in teaching makes the t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, for instance, i think, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1767.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12173913043 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8054766855 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536231884058 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3588491584 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.625 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.375 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.79166666667 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0254086316463 0.236089414692 11% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00682012757057 0.076458572812 9% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327081827959 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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