The internet has neumerous benifits to all aspects of our life, especialy with the evolution that occur in the tehnological field. Therefor I think government should provide a free internat access for their citizens as other crucial things like roads and buildings. In this essay I will illustrate my opion, and give a couple reason to explain why I believe that.
First of all, using internet help the student to get any information they need them in their studying, like do homework our project, us we know the high cost have to pay every month for getting access to internet.furthermore, not all people have a suitable buget for that. For example last years my son enrolled in collage, he has many duity and assenment that has to do, so we connect with verizon company to provid us internet access, we to pay 75$ each month, that is to much for our buget. In this year the school give the student free internent, so they give appotunity to all person to get benifit.
Second, we can use internet in many aspect of our live, like searching for places. for instance, in medical purpose, some times we need to lookfore medical care as soon as possible, we can google app to search for special docter and identify which one is provesional by seeing the reviews about him. in the other hand we need internet for navigation to reach our distenation easly without interept. from my life, last summer, I went vacation with my familly to Newyork, by using navigation to figer out wich road is faster,that is why we arrived in short time, in addition, by using google, we search to find amazing place for intertament, comfortable hotel, and good resturants. for these reasons we saved our time and spent a very enjoyible trip with each other.
In conclusion,due to the importance of internet for the teaching , medical, and intertament purposes, I suggests that, the government should provide a free access for interrnet survices for all people.
The internet has neumerous benifits to all aspects of our life, especialy with the evolution that occur in the tehnological field. Therefor I think government should provide a free internat access for their citizens as other crucial things like roads and buildings. In this essay I will illustrate my opion, and give a couple reason to explain why I believe that.
First of all, using internet help the student to get any information they need them in their studying, like do homework our project, us we know the high cost have to pay every month for getting access to internet.furthermore, not all people have a suitable buget for that. For example last years my son enrolled in collage, he has many duity and assenment that has to do, so we connect with verizon company to provid us internet access, we to pay 75$ each month, that is to much for our buget. In this year the school give the student free internent, so they give appotunity to all person to get benifit.
Second, we can use internet in many aspect of our live, like searching for places. for instance, in medical purpose, some times we need to lookfore medical care as soon as possible, we can google app to search for special docter and identify which one is provesional by seeing the reviews about him. in the other hand we need internet for navigation to reach our distenation easly without interept. from my life, last summer, I went vacation with my familly to Newyork, by using navigation to figer out wich road is faster,that is why we arrived in short time, in addition, by using google, we search to find amazing place for intertament, comfortable hotel, and good resturants. for these reasons we saved our time and spent a very enjoyible trip with each other.
In conclusion,due to the importance of internet for the teaching , medical, and intertament purposes, I suggests that, the government should provide a free access for interrnet survices for all people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, second, so, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in short, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79402985075 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73369211184 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579104477612 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.2678901696 48.9658058833 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.833333333 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9166666667 20.6045352989 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 5.45110844103 206% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412422844341 0.236089414692 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177604156435 0.076458572812 232% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.175756632627 0.0737576698707 238% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.308607335771 0.150856017488 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.223433160567 0.0645574589148 346% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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